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Revenge Author: The Outsider
(Added on Feb 27, 2004) (This month 56231 readers) (Total 74288 readers)
The baroness's younger sister captures: Lady Jaye and Scarlett, before she trains them to be her slaves.

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Weighed Average (?): (3.5/10)
Average Rating: (3/10)
Highest Rating: (3/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Aug 9, 2006
the rating is only for the storyline, i will give you a 1 for the story itself (2/10)

Reviewer: jbowler65 (Edit) Rating: Mar 8, 2004
Poor writing right from the start. The premise could be interesting, but the execution was lacking. A good editor would help quite a bit. (3/10)

Reviewer: lex ludite (Edit) Rating: Feb 27, 2004
There seems to be a trend developing on the site wherein "authors" are translating their version of various comic books or tapes into prose. The first paragraph said it all. The writing is not up to snuff and it's all downhill from there. I would advise the author to consider teaming with someone interested in editing and perhaps even doing some of the translating from picture to prose. (3/10)

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