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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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sayuna
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Sep 19, 2008 |
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loved the build up and exquisite pace. Certainly captivating for the first few chapters - and still nicely urges you on till the end. Thanks for the nice story :o) (10/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 5, 2007 |
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I will let you rtaing speak for itself, no wordy review is needed GREAT JOB (10/10)
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longrover
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Jun 26, 2004 |
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Stories whose theme is a woman's discovery of a magic link to the past are among my favorites. This example is exceptionally well plotted and written. (10/10)
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cossette
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Apr 14, 2004 |
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Very well writen with 0 spelling or gramatical mistakes that I could pick out. The story flowed like a true work of liteature. My only complaint is that it almost begged for a few more chapters, or perhaps a sequil. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
gomez
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2004)
- Wow, thanks for the compliments and comments! I do agree that it ended abruptly. I realized that I was getting awfully long-winded and decided that it needed an ending, any ending, and I thought at the time that I could perhaps add a sequel or something later. I may, still, but I haven't been writing much since then. I have a few ideas for half a dozen stories, but I've only made a tiny bit of progress on each one.
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| Reviewer:
Omdom
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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This story was superlative in every way--style, creativity, writing ability! I especially loved the vivid descriptions of various costumes. The consensual aspect and the absense of real harm to the protagonist also appealed to me. It was good to see someone with similar "kinks..." Way to go Gomez!!! (10/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 1, 2004 |
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One of the few tens I have given out in the last few months. I think the introduction was great. A story of more than a few sections needs to build and the effort you put into setting the psychological scene pays off as the chapters unfold. Bravo! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
gomez
(Edit) (Mar 4, 2004)
- I'm flattered by your high praise. Thanks a bunch!
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| Reviewer:
Lord Douche
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Feb 29, 2004 |
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Not long enough! :'(
Excellent idea though. (10/10)
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gomez
(Edit) (Mar 4, 2004)
- "not long enough" is a pretty good compliment, but one I've heard before. Then again, I've occasionally been told I'm too long-winded, so I guess one can't please everyone. Thanks for your comments.
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Feb 28, 2004 |
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I loved it! The descriptions of the consentuality, the comfortable bondage, and the caring are a pleasure to read, re-read, and enjoy years and years later.
Sidenote - Yes, I do think his "usual" style of writing is wonderful... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
gomez
(Edit) (Mar 4, 2004)
- High praise indeed, thank you very much. I write what is familiar and what turns me on, or at least what I can identify with closely, so perhaps that comes through a bit. Furthermore I'm not terribly good at writing about more serious D/s or S/m, so I tend to shy away from those topics, or only hint at them. I've occasionally taken flack for spending too much time on descriptions of clothing or elaborate equipment and bondage, but hey _I'm_a_fetishist_perv_, not an SM perv, so the more intense D/s stuff doesn't come naturally to me. Anyhoo, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And no, I don't know when I'll get another story out. :)
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Faibhar
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Feb 27, 2004 |
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Bram Stoker SIT DOWN! Despite the somewhat patronizing tone this writer sets with his overture and epilogue (and gee, his "usual" style of writing must be wonderful...) "T.R.O.H.M." is a good read fit for anyone who enjoys good fiction - kinky or not. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
gomez
(Edit) (Mar 4, 2004)
- Hmm, I didn't realize the intro could be interpreted as patronizing. Sorry about that, I may need to rewrite it or just take it out. OTOH, I got in the habit of writing explanatory intros because I got so many really inappropriate and/or rude inquiries, insults, etc, mixed in with the helpful criticisms and attaboys. Thanks for your comments.
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