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A new Toy
Author: PussNboots
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(Added on Feb 20, 2004)
(This month 21286 readers) (Total 55168 readers) |
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Control, and mind-fucking was his game, and he just found himself a new toy... |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 10, 2004 |
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good concept needs major editing and spell checking (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Aug 2, 2004 |
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i liked your story. yes, you had a few typing errors, but ... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nuditarian
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Apr 7, 2004 |
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Good storyline. Like to see it continued, though with better spelling. :-) (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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too many mistakes in spelling and grammar... makes the story unreadable. (2/10)
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