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The Alchemist' Apprentice
Author: Desperado
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(Added on Feb 20, 2004)
(This month 32739 readers) (Total 54105 readers) |
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Avedra, the clumsy apprentice to the Master Alchemist Edern, ruins an experiment for the search for the Philosopher's Stone. She becomes an experiment herself,is punished by Edern and then given over to a night of debauchery with the king's soldiers. There she discovers something far more important. |
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Apr 29, 2004 |
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I am totally enthralled by the writing, the heat and the plot development. This author knows how to write and provides plenty of proof in this great opening part of what I hope will be an epic saga. This is one well worth reading, especially now that the missing prologue has surfaced in part 2 which is really part 1 all over again. Then again part 1 contained all of part 2. To paraphrase Vinny from Welcome Back Kotter, "I'm so confused!" (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Jinn
(Edit) (May 3, 2004)
- I made a mistake in the format and I fixed the problem. Enjoy this great story!
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Mar 1, 2004 |
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Well conceived from beginning to end. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 22, 2004 |
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Kind of a rough start, but the best is indeed saved for last here. Looking forward to further adventures (8/10)
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soleil
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Feb 22, 2004 |
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Excellent, I liked this one very much! Very well written, and enjoyable to read. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Wyn
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Feb 21, 2004 |
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Excellently written story. It seemed to me that the pace of the brisk, yet refreshing in it's flow. This is a great foundation for a much larger work. I hope it is a foreshadowing of the possiblities to come. (9/10)
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