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Party Animal
Author: fireball
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(Added on Feb 16, 2004)
(This month 138554 readers) (Total 212493 readers) |
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A beautiful female executive is discovered trying to defraud the company and pays a humiliating and degrading price at the hands of her boss and his kinky friends. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jun 21, 2005 |
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Not much sublety, is there? Others seem to like it but it's exactly my cup. Too "mechanistic," if there's such a word. Slam, bam, wham. Quite a reach for a woman who had reachd CFO position at that age to be that quick and easy in acquiescing. Think I would have preferred it from the woman's POV. However, that's my story. This is yours, and I'm sure there's a large audience for it. Thanks though. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
herkess
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Jun 17, 2005 |
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I enjoyed the beginning, the set up.
Thereafter I felt it was not capable of suspending disbelief.
Maybe for some people this does not matter but for me it does. Sorry mate. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Sep 8, 2004 |
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Very enjoyable, nice work in a classic genre. Certainly leaves you hoping for more. (9/10)
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teamster
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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so far so good... looking forwrd to turther humiliations. her reluctance and the fact that she is free to choose lends an element of tension to the story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
arobert29
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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Very enjoyable and well written. Nice timing. Looking forward to further punishments and humiliations. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
kavasier_63
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Feb 17, 2004 |
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Well written with a great story line. The author obviously put alot of time and effort into the story as well as the presentation. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ms2bused
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Feb 17, 2004 |
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To me this would have been a masterpiece but for it being from a man first person! I adored the part of the forced carriage of the woman and will hope that there will be far more F/F involvement to come! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Feb 17, 2004 |
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Yes, this one is well done. Blackmail stories like this one are fun, because we can justify everything with the belief that the thief has it all coming to them. In general, I like these better than stories with innocent victims. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 16, 2004 |
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WOW i was realt drawn into this story with the gradula build up, i hope more chaprers are coming soon, please let me know (10/10)
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