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A Gift for a Friend
Author: Quale
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(Added on Feb 16, 2004)
(This month 12014 readers) (Total 30240 readers) |
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This story is told from the boyfriends perspective while he tricks his girlfriend into letting him tie her up in his roomates bedroom. Not until she is restrained does he reveal what gift he is giving his roomate for his birthday. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 13, 2005 |
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a very good story! it is well-written and has a great plot. all she needed was a bow on her cunt! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sally J
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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I loved it! Short and sweet. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Mar 1, 2004 |
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This story has a few oops’s that are distracting (such as taking a dress off a woman in handcuffs). The synopsis also gave away too much. However, the story was still enjoyable to read. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Quale
(Edit) (May 16, 2005)
- Thanks for your review of my story. I just wanted to point out that the dress and handcuffs issue you talk about was addressed as the women was described as wearing a strapless dress. I appreciate the point though that there was too much distance between this mention and the handcuffs which might cause confusion for some readers.
Oops I take that back. Apparently the part about the strapless dress got edited out. I recently submitted a version addressing some of these issues. I feel embarased getting something wrong about my own story. Sorry.
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Feb 17, 2004 |
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Another quality, gentle story from a new contributor to the site. Although I do not share myself, I still enjoyed this story of sharing. (9/10)
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