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The Swimmer
Author: Lord Douche
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(Added on Feb 11, 2004)
(This month 54927 readers) (Total 72341 readers) |
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A young teenager takes a swim in the neighbours pool, but she is not alone... |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Jun 4, 2011 |
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Seriously kinky and strangely erotic. Sad there was no follow up chapter or did you want it to be left to the readers' imaginations? (9/10)
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nikita
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Mar 12, 2006 |
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LD, This is the first time I've read a story like this and it kept me on the edge of my chair. When I finished it, my pussy was throbbing. WOW! There are only a few people whose writing has ever done that to me...and I'm pretty jaded.
(10/10)
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jip
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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Amazing story. fascinating. well written (9/10)
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Riptieron
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Jan 6, 2005 |
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This story was recommended to me by Redeva, and it was just what the Doctor ordered!
-RIP (9/10)
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agp_millie
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Dec 21, 2004 |
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I know you finished perfectly, but please make a Pt.2 ... (smile) Loved and soaked TWO towels, reading ....
agp_millie@lycos.com xxx ... i enjoy Editing too.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Dec 29, 2004)
- Glad you like it millie, but there won't be a second part :) Sorry
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e.e. norcod
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Feb 19, 2004 |
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If you want a great story go to an experienced author. This may be L.D.'s greatest story. Seldom do you read a story that better encompasses the term "feel", this is tactile.
I only give a ten when I cannot offer any suggestion as to how the story could be improved. Often, when the story is not exactly the genera I love, I will fall back on "well I love reading about c.p. being administered to reluctant females". Well no way this time, this story is a ten! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Feb 19, 2004)
- Wow, e.e.! Thank you so much. I really enjoyed writing it, the first part where she gets into the pool was great :)
And never fear, work is still progressing on Julie. I haven't submitted any of it yet, but I'm up to Chapter 20 now. Also planning on revising the whole story before it's complete, to make things as good as it can be.
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jbowler65
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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Great Sci-Fi fantasy story! (9/10)
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bdsmbill
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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What a relief! I just had to give another story a 2, and then I read this one. Very nice indeed. Well done. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2004)
- Thanks :) I really should do some reviewing of my own.
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| Reviewer:
_sullen_rose_
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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Very nice, and very original. I will be a fan until it ends. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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what else need i say (9/10)
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Spitman
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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That was awesome, totally original. I remember only two stories at all similar. The story carries you along and then dumps you out on the grass. A great read. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2004)
- Thanks, Spitman. You liked the ending then? (No spoilers :D)
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| Reviewer:
GaryWilcox
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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Brilliant, LD. When I encounter women who want the 'tentacle hentai' fantasy stuff over at rapedungeon, I'm going to tell them to start here with your story... A great one-shot. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2004)
- Thank you Gary! Yeah, it was a little inspired by tentacle hentai, but mostly I just thought it up one day :D
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