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Alison's Story
Author: Alison Richards
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(Added on Feb 4, 2004)
(This month 165963 readers) (Total 333281 readers) |
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A mature, respectable young mother reflects on her youth, when as a firebrand feminist she is taunted into becoming submissive. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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Rating:  (10/10) |
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Jun 1, 2007 |
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A highly plausible, very well-paced and well-plotted, 1st person story. Has a real ring of truth. Excellent attention to the thoughts, feelings, impulses, and motivations of the title character. A 1st rate job. I very much look forward to future installments.
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13 April 2006 addendum:
I've been following this story for almost 27
months now, and I must say that it has always
been a red-letter day when a new episode
appears. The parts with Adam and "Grandpa" are
particularly juicy. I don't give high ratings
easily, and I always pay attention to the verbal
explanation of each rating level, but this is a
classic "10." Well done, Alison.
(BTW, "bigcat" makes some excellent points in
his 13 Jan 06 review.)
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Spring 2007 Addendum
So now we've come to the end...and I'm sorry. I
really wish this story could have gone on and on.
As it is though, Alison has accomplished a rare
feat: written a very long story, in which the
high quality with which it began carried through
to the very end. (If there's a better story on
this site, I pray I find it, because it will be
superb, indeed.) In my first review of this
story, I gave it a 10. My only regret now is
that there wasn't a higher score that I could
have awarded. Thank you, Alison.
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Minusman1009
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Apr 30, 2007 |
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Hands down one of the very best erotica dealing with dominance/submission and the humiliation of subs that I have ever read. This site needs more stuff like this to balance all the crap thats usually displayed here! (10/10)
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mastervader
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Sep 25, 2006 |
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Well done. Kudos. A very erotic and plausable work. Would like to see more work from you. (9/10)
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Master_c
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Jun 25, 2006 |
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An excellant story of submissivness. I admire your plot very much and if it is fact or fiction, it is great. As I have said in my letter to you personally, it is just fantastic. Keep going and show how the last 3 weeks are even more humiliating and sexual than before. Then, before quitting, tell how you went from this back to being vanilla for John. Best of luck in all you do. (10/10)
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non-writer
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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Excellent, well writen (10/10)
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Anneya
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Apr 22, 2006 |
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I love this story and am looking forward to the next part being posted. (9/10)
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Master Mark
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Apr 17, 2006 |
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I always look forward to reading the next episode. The story so far is excellent. Well written grammatically and few spelling mistakes. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 13, 2006 |
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Outstanding, that simple, great flow, detail, well laid out, i wish al stories where thos HOT (10/10)
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Geijin
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Jan 31, 2006 |
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One of the best story I have ever read... (10/10)
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GoddessOfNight
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Jan 14, 2006 |
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Can't wait to see how the last three weeks unfold. Especailly interested to see how it is that she is able to go back to a vanilla life after all she's discovered about her sexuality. (10/10)
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Borborad
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Jan 14, 2006 |
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my score says enough ;-) (10/10)
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bigcat
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Jan 13, 2006 |
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New comments after Chpt 16: Masterful, combining all the elements of Alison's erotic nature. Just terrific, even finding a way to combine her fear of exposure to a student and the audition for Leroy. Love it. Perhaps my favorite on the site. Comment after 15: couldn't add on for some reason. Liked the addition but felt the story now moving into standard-fare avenues. Accepting to be a sextoy for a large group of black men, while traditional in this genre, I feel goes against her innate desires. Her humiliation was always heightened by her submissiveness being revealed blatantly to those who knew her previously as an uptight snob. What's humiliating about having her innermost desires exposed to strangers? Embarrassing, perhaps, but not humiliating, which is why I thought the last three weeks would more likely involve the school environment, both peers and students of both sexes. Nothing as humiliating as being exposed in front of another woman, particularly a younger girl. (10/10)
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oldwino
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Dec 9, 2005 |
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great wekk written story. please finish the last three weeks. my gf wikk love it. i'll make her read it aloud nude in my lap. she will want to act it out when we are out of town. plae continue writing stories like this with plenty of ex and hum. (10/10)
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BigCat
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Nov 8, 2005 |
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Loved it! One of the best on the site IMHO. Thank you from a new admirer. Great scenes, extremely well done portrayal of need that drives the character. Would like very much to see it continued. (10/10)
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Racecar
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Aug 9, 2005 |
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Very well written with a good plot and character development for this genre of writing. I would like to see more from this author but hope she/he does not drag this particular story out endlessly. (10/10)
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ShyGuy1
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Dec 3, 2004 |
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Wow, amazing story. I enjoyed the initial seduction. The desperation was overwhelmimg. Can't wait for more.
(10/10)
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Lindalooking
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Nov 4, 2004 |
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Excellent pacing, good plot line and interesting characters. (9/10)
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DutchDaddy
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Oct 13, 2004 |
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Very good story!
When will we get more? (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Apr 25, 2004 |
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Excellent story with plenty of details and action. (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 8, 2004 |
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Extremely good writing for an author new to this site. I suspect that this writer is not new to the art of writing although they appear to be new to BDSM.
It will be interesting to see which way the writer developes the story, for I suspect that this could become a serial encompassing a dozen to a score of episodes. My personal preference, as should be obvious from my fictions, is feminine c.p. but in any case I look forward to future installments.
As an aside, this writer has sufficient talent to avoid the crudities (Bitch, Whore, etc) that mar so many stories. Shaping and refining a willful feminist into a sextoy and paintoy can be done with elegance and refinement. In "Story of O", perhaps the greatest subjugation tale of all time, I don't remember a single "Slut". If the greatest woman BDSM writer of all time could do it, so can you. (9/10)
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longrover
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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Good characters and plot, lots of action, and a believable plot. Framing the story as a flashback from Alison's later life works very well. (9/10)
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Rick28
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Mar 3, 2004 |
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I'm from germany and I've just read Alison's story and must admit: her story was a real pleasure, because it has both: an exzellent form and a content you can really enjoy. Alisons realistic setting with a developing plot and her adequate use of vocabular with an great insight into her emotions make this story to one of the best short storys and a pleasure to each reader.
I would just prefer a minor change in the topic: Alison's story sounds for me to objective so that I would prefer a more emotional, provocative topic, which could gain more attention.
None the less I'm sure it still will be a pleaure to many readers reading about the humiliations and the descent of a good looking feminist recognizing she has become a dirty, little slut in heat enjoying to satisfy all the sexual urges of an arrogant male. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
merseyman
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Mar 2, 2004 |
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I really have enjoyed the Parts submitted to date. The tale is well written in a vocabulary that makes it believable. I look forward to the continued pleasure of reading the rest of the story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
crewel
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Feb 24, 2004 |
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Excellent work. I await the sequels with great anticipation. It is very refreshing to hear a new "voice". (9/10)
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ron8nl
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Feb 13, 2004 |
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Please write on! I like the slightly forced consensuality and the sex. So well written. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Feb 4, 2004 |
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This was an excellent piece of writing. I liked it a great deal, and I hope to see more from this author. (10/10)
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