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My Wife. His Whore.
Author: Victor Mann
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(Added on Jan 22, 2004)
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A man discovers that his wife is deeply involved in an D/s affair with a Master whom she met on-line. |
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iggygor
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Nov 27, 2011 |
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Impressively written, so much so that one can get lost in the story and the exquisite descriptions. Thanks! (9/10)
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beverley
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Nov 26, 2011 |
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Well written..good tale for all the men who want to see their woman with another man..good for the women who want to be with another man but not have the responsibility or the guilt. ..this is an urge that many have but won't discuss or admit.. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Oct 11, 2010 |
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Most excellent rendition of the cravings of a woman and the reaction of her surroundings to her shifting behaviour.
It's stories like this which make roaming around The Library worthwhile...
You have my thanks, Vic.
JJ (10/10)
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needynicole
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Mar 19, 2010 |
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The primal need of Leena and Lon (and others like them), to submit to the power and majesty of the Alpha male is at the very core of our society. An excellent read which kept me titilated and aroused throughout. (9/10)
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Kris.Kross
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Mar 3, 2010 |
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I have lurked for some time. This is close to my favorite story on this site and I react to it on a visceral level. The repudiation of equality and the wardrobe details I like.
I just wish that it would be updated more often. But I suppose that this is a common request for stories here. (8/10)
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justplainbob
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Feb 27, 2010 |
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How can you not like this one. A little heavy handed? Sure, why not.
I'm guessing some of you dudes would like to see your wives in this position. But of course you want them back when it is over. But who knows?
Keep it up my Mann. this is a great tale. (10/10)
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kandslut
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Dec 2, 2008 |
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Superb and sexy story, just hits the mark for us. We have a similar set up to this, slave has another master, but its not as yet taken to this level. Nice ideas and who knows what in the future if we are lucky... More please. (8/10)
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bkmasta
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Dec 23, 2007 |
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I always think this is your best work and thank you for continuing this story awaiting the next chapter. please keep up the good work
(9/10)
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Night Writer
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Jul 22, 2007 |
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Some good stuff here. "Feminist turns submissive whore" is an interesting character study - how thin is the line between the two? I'd love to see more from the wife's POV, and more dialog between Leena and her new Master, especially re the competition between Leena and Trina. Thanks for the note and for a very entertaining read.
-NW
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Millie
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Jul 28, 2006 |
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I just found this story and wish there were more chapters. I would have loved to find out what Lon did next. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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very well conceived idea and a great story (9/10)
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sunburststrat
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Sep 10, 2004 |
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The wife's letter in the first chapter was one of the most erotic things I have ever read!
I love the plot of a feminist giving herself over to her submissive nature.
Lots of good ideas in here. I go definitely go for some more. (8/10)
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jbowler65
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Apr 27, 2004 |
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Good start to the story. Well written. Hopefully more will be coming soon. (9/10)
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robert370
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Mar 28, 2004 |
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An excellent story. I thought that it was both erotic and believable Too bad that it is so short. (10/10)
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j_michell
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Feb 2, 2004 |
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Interesting start. (7/10)
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Will Storm
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Jan 29, 2004 |
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Really liked the start of your story. Exposing the hinden desires of an up-tight feminist and following her slow decent into the world of domination is a great story topic. Take your time and try to let the reader see inside her head as well as that of her husband. Hope you complete the next chapter soon. Thanks for writing. Will (9/10)
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padagat
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Jan 25, 2004 |
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hope it will to something else its a good start. hope it will have some more story..... (7/10)
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cd_subbie_me
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Jan 24, 2004 |
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please! please! please! this story must continue! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Victor Mann
(Edit) (Jan 24, 2004)
- Hi,
Glad you like My story. I'm working on part two, but I don't know when I'll be finished. Thanks for the feedback.
Are you male or female sub? Please repy to my e-mail on file.
Victor Mann
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bdsmbill
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Jan 22, 2004 |
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Interesting tale so far. I hope the hubby gets his back up soon, or this isn't going to go anywhere. (7/10)
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