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BBW meets BDSM
Author: zone
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(Added on Mar 11, 2001)
(This month 86224 readers) (Total 109892 readers) |
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A girl's journey into bondage and mastery. Then she got to know what the truth was. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
Rating:  (3.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 18, 2006 |
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needs major work, spelling, editing ect (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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Jul 20, 2003 |
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Not bad, but could use better language skills. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
LaJan
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Aug 7, 2002 |
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With the new guidlines added to the numbered rating system it was clear that the best this story could possibly get was a 1. Grammer and punctuation were just terrible, the "story" didn't go anywhere the title promised, and it was broken into "chapters" almost randomly. I don't know if the author is still writing but, if so, a basic English class is badly needed before contributing anything further. This was just plain bad. Peace. LaJan (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Stefanie
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May 29, 2002 |
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The story isn't bad, but I find it to be poorly written, wich makes it unpleasant to read. (4/10)
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