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Forced Fetish
Author: bokkey
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(Added on Jan 9, 2004)
(This month 39804 readers) (Total 113833 readers) |
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Lady gets blackmailed to perform nude shots and more. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
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Oct 14, 2006 |
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Apart from the many, gutwrenching spelling mistakes and the rather clumsy blackmail setup (when a girlfriend of mine would send me some pics to supposedly blackmail me, I would contact her first, not the police... Since in the story, most pics display the girl herself, blackmailing the boyfriend with those very pictures is an odd thing to do), I still highly enjoyed the rest of the story...
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nuditarian
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Apr 7, 2004 |
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Lovw thw storyline. Hope to see more of this. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Mar 10, 2004 |
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the many mistakes in spelling, grammar, and word choice make this story unreadable. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2006)
- Unreadable? You sure you wore the right glasses?
True, there's a lot of spelling errors/typos, but for the rest, the story is way above par... so a meager 2-rating is a tad unfair towards the writer and the content of the sory. To my knowledge, this isn't a spelling/grammar contest...
JJ
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Wyn
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Feb 5, 2004 |
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Interesting premise. There were spelling mistakes and also in paragraph construction. I'm interested in seeing how the story progresses. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 11, 2004 |
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I am realy curious to see how the story progresses from here, i love the theme (9/10)
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