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Change of Fortune
Author: Captv8td
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(Added on Jan 6, 2004)
(This month 48182 readers) (Total 94389 readers) |
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Laura had a happy and comfortable life until her husband's business started to fail. She agreed to be sold as a part-time slave to some friends in exchange for help in the business. But soon she found herself in a whole new world of confusing emotions and experiences. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Panther007
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Jul 8, 2011 |
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Really enjoyed this one, the love developing between Laura and Rose was very sweet and makes me wish for more chapters to see her eventually divorce her husband and join Rose in the scene forever. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 6, 2005 |
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well layed out, written and thought through the story was not rushed (9/10)
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BigCat
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Sep 21, 2005 |
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Really interesting. Some inconsistencies and not necessarily torrid, but good situations. Ambivalence of feelings of both Laura and Rose well done. (9/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Apr 3, 2004 |
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Truly enjoyed and hope there is a sequel.. Very well written and pace was very well done. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Apr 2, 2004 |
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Very well written and developed story. (9/10)
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teamster
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Mar 11, 2004 |
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finally some characters that have some depth and inner life... some personality. I"m not all that much into pony girls and the story itself was actually fairly tame, but the writing had a certain charm for me. my only criticism is the redundant use of the word "sex" as in "he stroked her sex" if you like i could suppy you with a list of synonyms, both crude and refined... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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Very professionally written, but unnecessarily complicated (although the indication seems to be that the complication is part of the fun). I wasn't planning to review this story, but anyone who goes to the bother of putting in three chapter nines deserves at least a little consideration. I should note that this is a ponygirl story, which I do not care for, but the lactation and fisting partially make up for it. (7/10)
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bdsmbill
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Jan 8, 2004 |
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This was a nice tale. Hopefully you will finish it soon. (8/10)
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lex ludite
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Jan 6, 2004 |
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I feel like I've just been intruding by reading this story. It is certainly not my cup of tea, but the excellent writing and my own curiosity prevailed. If you are the kind of reader who enjoys the more genteel aspects of dominance, humiliation and sex with most of the emphasis on some very strong female characters, then this is for you. As for this reader, it was a very nice change of pace from the more violent side of existence. My compliments to the author for an enjoyable experience. (8/10)
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