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The Perfect Man
Author: CRUDEDUDE
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(Added on Dec 30, 2003)
(This month 86156 readers) (Total 137290 readers) |
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A day in the life of female submissive masochist. |
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| Reviewer:
cranberry
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Aug 1, 2014 |
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Some writers on this site write cliched, run of the mill, whips,n, chains type stuff. There are others, who write, what might be perceived as horrific, vitriolic, misogyny by some. Not to me though. This, for me, is a masterpiece of humiliation.And, for me, humiliation is the very core of BDSM. I just wish there was more tales like this on this site. Granted, it may not be to everyone's taste. But it sure pushes the buttons for me. That's why it's on my library shelf. I'm actually no misogynist. Sorry, if this isn't exactly a very literate, well rounded review. I've never written anything before, concerning the stories on here. A great deal of the stories do little for me. But then again, there are some fantastic gems, which will hopefully, eventually find there way onto my shelf. All of the stories there have some kind of qualities and ideas that appeal to me. By the way, what an absolutely fantastic resource BDSM library is! (10/10)
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HardBur
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Mar 30, 2010 |
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Just read this, thought it was well written. A little over the top and irrational on some of the aspects, but the main idea of male supremacy and females desiring to be subservient were excellent. I enjoyed it very much. Would like to see the story extended to the slaves breast enhancement, and his relations with other women to further humiliate the slave. (10/10)
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Dominica Potestas
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Jun 10, 2008 |
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Possibly one of the best stories on here. The self-hatred and utter submission is so well-told. (10/10)
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Mothbrad
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Dec 10, 2006 |
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I only skimmed this story, so I'll be modifying my rating as soon as I read it properly, but it looked like there were some great ideas and good execution here. (7/10)
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BigCat
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Jul 29, 2005 |
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Wow! Another CRUDEDUDE classic. (8/10)
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badcatholicgirl
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Jul 12, 2005 |
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i read it over and over, very rough and dirty story hope to hear more, i lik the debasement, self-loathing, a bit over the top, but the best of your three stories (9/10)
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mwatt495
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Dec 30, 2004 |
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Once again great story for those who love a female to debase themselves. (10/10)
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serenity
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Oct 16, 2004 |
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Writting is a bit rough, but a great story (8/10)
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gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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CrudeDude is not that! I think that he was probably the jailhouse intellectual even. This might even be an autobiographical portion of the tale? It's great when authors incorporate their own unique experiences into their works.
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<<The day he was paroled she picked him up. That was the last time she got to drive. He placed her in the trunk and drove the five hours back to her place per the directions she had provided him. Once there, he dragged her out of the trunk and inside her house and threw her to the floor, where for the first of many times, he brutally fucked her in what was now His house. Per His instructions and anticipated release, she had been making the arrangements to sign over all her belongings to him. Her boss had set her up with the attorney. Her house, her car, her bank account, her investments, her life insurance, in short all of her worldly belongings were now His. She owned absolutely nothing.>>
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teamster
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Mar 11, 2004 |
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I dont mind the writing style but the whole thing was just too fucking nasty for me... whats erotic about just endless pain and suffering? (6/10)
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- Replied by:
cranberry
(Edit) (Aug 1, 2014)
- It would be a shame if we all liked the same stuff. I do admit, this is a rather nasty tale. Some of the stories on this site, such as the snuff, and dolcet ones are way too extreme even for me. But, after all, it's all just fantasy. What appealed to me about this story was the humiliation element. I don't think one can ever have too much of that!?
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Curtis
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Jan 12, 2004 |
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Talk about a waste of oxygen! Grammar aside, your math needs some work. (3/10)
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emman2727
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Jan 6, 2004 |
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Very exicting story! I enjoyed the way you put the slut's thoughts in the story; how she thinks she deserves this treatment, how she's happy to have someone you consider her like a pet. For your next story, it would be nice if you could add some 'bitch training'( collar, leash, dog bowl,cage),just a suggestion! Keep up the good work! (8/10)
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