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Little Red Riding Hood (Meat Version)
Author: Jay
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(Added on Dec 30, 2003)
(This month 4 readers) (Total 22251 readers) |
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This is the way Little Red Riding Hood was MEANT to be; warning: this story contains vore and dolcett style erotica. Enjoy! |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rob.wilson
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Nov 25, 2005 |
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I have to agree with the others. Some more detail, some more humor. I think that this has potential and could be rather fun, if you took some time to rewrite it. (5/10)
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balorlv
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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I have to agree with the other reviewers. It lacks detail. With some effort this could be made into descent story. (4/10)
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_sullen_rose_
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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Call me light hearted, but this story was actually quite crude. Phrases like "so that all that was left were her bones and some stuffing, the scene looking much like turkey dinner after Thanksgiving". Along with the past reviewer, I must have blinked and missed the funniness, but, unfortunatley, I did not miss the crude humor. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jan 12, 2004 |
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As much as it might surprise Fire-Bird to read this, I've got to agree with Mistress Maeve. This is more an outline than a story, and I must have blinked and missed both the humor and the kink. What was here was pretty well written, though (spelling, punctuation, grammar, sentence and paragraph stucture), so I hope Jay will apply his talents to something a little more sexy (and something he can take seriously) in the future. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mistress Maeve
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Jan 10, 2004 |
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There is very little detail, just an outline... I felt this story was a waste of time... If you want a good dolcett story check out Fire-Bird's posts! (4/10)
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Faibhar
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Jan 4, 2004 |
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A ferocious fable that reads like Brothers Grim - after they were old enough to legally drink.
Boccaccio's spelling is more accurate than my typing, but we both sort of agree that LRRH (Meat Version) is a page turner... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Jan 3, 2004 |
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A Grimm furry tale indeed. (Sorry, Faibhar, I had that line in mind even before I saw your review and I didn't want want Little RRH to go to 'waist' without cooking up a proper send-off. ///
Perhaps I'm being too hard on this story, because it's hard to point at any specific passage and say "this passage would be better if the author had done such and such". I guess my reaction is "Why?" If the story was meant to me erotic, it wasn't (to me). If it was meant to be funny, it wasn't (to me). But I must say that I did keep turning the pages. It's akin to the car accident on the freeway syndrome. You don't really want to see what's there, but you don't want to miss it either. (7/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Dec 31, 2003 |
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Tourguide says it all. An awesome mix of kink and humor. I always thought that the classical Little Red Riding Hood deserved this type of treatment.
Why not a ten? There are minor grammatical and stylistic irregularities that mar this story but why quibble. A nine it certainly deserves for verve and energy.
Great Stuff. Look forward to more of your stories. (9/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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Dec 31, 2003 |
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Excellent. Was very enjoyable, with a great mix of humor and kink. (8/10)
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