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Violets Anal Training
Author: Powerone
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(Added on Dec 30, 2003)
(This month 45832 readers) (Total 89511 readers) |
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Violet is subjected to anal and sphincter training so she will be prepared for anal sex. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Reviewer:
nikita
(Edit) |
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Jan 1, 2005 |
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Please finish the rest of the story!! Did she please him? Did she truly enjoy the benefits of the training? Did she have to practice on the trainer and later the delivery boy on campus? Do you think the delivery boy rounded up his fraternity brothers to show off her talents? Please end the longing for the conclusion!! I am dripping in anticipation... (8/10)
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Reviewer:
LadyMencken
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Aug 10, 2004 |
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OH GODS!!!!!!!!! thank YOU POWERONE!!!!!!! (10/10)
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Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Mar 3, 2004 |
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An excellent story, hits all the right spots. hope ther are more (8/10)
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Reviewer:
thatverybadgirl
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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looking forward to the next installment (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Powerone
(Edit) (Feb 8, 2004)
- Sorry, but this one had a The End at the end. No more to this story.
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Reviewer:
redEva
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Jan 6, 2004 |
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Your stories are always great, well written and enjoyable to read. I loved it. Not 10 just because i think you could have someone proofread it! (8/10)
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Reviewer:
drake7
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Jan 2, 2004 |
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The stories you have written in the past have been much better content wise. Mechanically they were better as well. The exposition to this story was, in my opinion, overly self indulgent. (4/10)
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Reviewer:
insex
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Jan 2, 2004 |
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4of10 (4/10)
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Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jan 1, 2004 |
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The ultimate fantasy I guess, to be part of your own story. That's a nice touch, but the story does not live up to your past performances in this reader's opinion. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Powerone
(Edit) (Jan 1, 2004)
- Actually, this is even more extreme then that, dual personality, the author and the person behind the author in the story.
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