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Paint Ball Wars
Author: BDSM Bill
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(Added on Dec 24, 2003)
(This month 20828 readers) (Total 37859 readers) |
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A man takes the vacation of a lifetime and gets some souvenirs he hadn't counted on. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Anak.Drakken
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Nov 16, 2006 |
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Great story with a lot of imagination and twists in the plot. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
niyah2
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Mar 1, 2004 |
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This story was incredible. from beginning to end it kept the reader totally enthralled. thank you for sharing your work with us.
niyah2 (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Jan 4, 2004 |
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This light-hearted romp through the jungle actually well displays the writer's craft of stroy telling. Despite the astronomical rock star prices (3 large a day PLUS lodging and extras) the idea is basically a realistic one and somewhere in this world there no doubt exists such a place. <br>The writer makes this story very believable and as others have said, fun.
Okay so 3 Gees per day is not bad, considering all you get (why is it I feel that a fine pre-owned car is just around the corner?). Still, there must be somewhere on earth where you can play paint balls with hotties, just like in the story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
bdsmbill
(Edit) (Jan 3, 2004)
- Oh, come on now... The 3 Gs a day actually included meals and lodging. Besides, he could do anything he wanted with four women (assuming he captured them, of course). What would a 24 hour a day hooker cost you here in the states? Times four? I thought the 3K per day was pretty reasonable.
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| Reviewer:
lcfwong
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Dec 31, 2003 |
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A well constructed story and the description of the pony ride and tango is very enjoyable. (9/10)
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sexyangel
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Dec 27, 2003 |
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This was a fun story. I liked that both the man and the women in the story get a chance to take as well as give. (10/10)
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rcb
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Dec 27, 2003 |
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How come when I go play paintball - I only get splattered with paint? (9/10)
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