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The REAL Cinderella
Author: Fire-Bird
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(Added on Dec 16, 2003)
(This month 21922 readers) (Total 44248 readers) |
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Written for the BDSMLibrary Writers Contest. We all know who Cinderella is and how she came to met the handsome Prince. But what happens next? Do we actually know what the handsome Prince is really like? This story follows what happens to Cinderella when she goes to live with the Prince in his castle. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 27, 2007 |
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nice job (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Jul 31, 2004 |
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I always wondered what happened after the Happily Ever After Part. Your version was pretty good. Felt a little sorry for her in the beginning, after all she is Cinderella. But deep down you always knew the happily ever after part was a load of bull anyway. Story had a good flow. You were not left lost during different parts of the story and of course Bella....let`s just say I would not want to have him mad at me ! Overall, pretty good writing and of course the plot twist was excellant. Have you ever thought of doing anything with Snow White and the seven Dwarfs.....I man is Dopey really Dopey or a fox in dwarf`s clothing. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
pbugler
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Jan 25, 2004 |
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The concept is outstanding - it's a really great idea to explore what happens to the "dream" ending of the fairy tale. Loved it!
My only negative is that the story is rather short on character development, but then what can you do in such a short story? (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Dec 18, 2003 |
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I always wondered what really happened after the words "and they lived happily ever after"; now I know and am a better person for it. My compliments to the author for trying to be original and still staying within his envelope which is over the top sex and violence. This is one author who really delivers when it comes to generating heat.In passing I might also mention that he writes well and does a fine job of editing his work. (8/10)
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