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Selma's Life and Passions
Author: lightstar
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(Added on Dec 14, 2003)
(This month 53878 readers) (Total 71341 readers) |
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Selma,wanting to live out some of her fantasies searched for a lover in the BDSM lifestyle. He fulfilled her every dream and she found she craved to be with him and submit to his every desire. |
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Oct 2, 2004 |
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I sincerely hope that English isn't your first language because your misuse of words takes away from what might have been a decent story. Get yourself a dictionary and make sure you are using the right word--for example "faze" not "phase" and "duct tape" not "duck tape." I think you have some potential here and I wish on your next chapter addition that you would clean-up the grammar. Don't depend on spellcheck because it won't catch a lot of errors. Thanks for sharing your work. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jun 20, 2004 |
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very ejnoyable (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 14, 2003 |
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So far so good, hope there is much, much more to come (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lightstar
(Edit) (Dec 14, 2003)
- Thank you. My first endeavor at erotic writing but have other chapters to submit.
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