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Hotel
Author: Flost48
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(Added on Dec 6, 2003)
(This month 166643 readers) (Total 241479 readers) |
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Woman meets her on line lover at a hotel and her life as a slave begins. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Rasputtin
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Feb 16, 2015 |
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This has to be the best story on BDSMlibrary. (10/10)
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Dred Tory
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Jul 14, 2012 |
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A woman should know her place. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 27, 2009 |
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Very enjoyable. Minor flaw is the scene in the hotelroom with the 'bull', where all of a sudden, after a nice introduction of the woman, she's being completely ignored. Everything evolves around her, but her actions and thoughts are dearly missing.
For the rest, I must say thet the story is well written and paced, with an endearing cow at the center of attention.
JJ (9/10)
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milly_mooe
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Oct 8, 2006 |
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Perhaps the most erotic story i have ever read and felt empathy with.
Please write more Mr.Flost, or better still, see my Yahoo profile ( milly_mooe ) and send me an E.mail if You think i could be of use to You in the FANTASY.
Yours faithfully,
milly mooe (10/10)
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H Dean
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May 9, 2006 |
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A rather depraved story, really. Fairly well thought out and well told. If there were any critisisms it would be the ease with which the girl was turned into a cow. I thought there should be more struggle than there was. It seemed far to easily done. Also, towards the end, I felt the story began to deteriorate a bit - it seemed rather contrived; almost as if the author were pushing too hard. For this genre of story this is an excellent example. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Flost
(Edit) (May 9, 2006)
- Thanks for your review.
I appreciate it when someone actually READS the story and can see what is going on.
You nailed it concerning the end. I just wanted out of there to go on to other things.
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JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 27, 2009)
- Well, H Dean may have read the story, but he missed the part where it says that the couple had been having an intense interent relationship over the previous 7 months, discussing all the possibilities of a further real-life experience.
That's why the woman was so easy to 'transform'...
JJ
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chksng19
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May 4, 2006 |
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An unusual story, told well. (9/10)
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chattel69
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May 4, 2006 |
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I don't know how many times I orgasmed reading this but I am hoping more is to come and we won't have to wait two years for it. (9/10)
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BB11CALL
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Dec 13, 2005 |
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lactation,I love it (9/10)
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nikita
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Oct 1, 2005 |
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Very well written. I love lactation stories and the descriptions of the humiliations. This certainly fit the bill. Although the beginning was a very good start, it could have been tighter, e.g. why was she at the hotel and why she was meeting this man could have been done with less words. That's just an opinion and falls under the style category, no biggie. The title threw me off completely. The body of the story was in tune with what I like in milking stories, the breeding subculture and the continuing dehumanizing of the cow. It was erotic and non-erotic making it a compelling read. The ending could have been more fitting to the general tone of the story. (9/10)
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AlwaysCocked
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Mar 3, 2004 |
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Excellent story, well written and well-paced. (9/10)
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Curtis
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Dec 28, 2003 |
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Does anyone but me think that it ended in an odd place? Not that I think it should be longer -- the author seems to have pretty well exhausted his material. I tried my hand at writing a lactation story awhile back, and reading this confirms my decision not to continue. No way I could compete with this. I do think the quality goes downhill a little as it continues. The first four chapters were nearly perfect, the next few very good, and the last disappointing only by contrast. (9/10)
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ron8nl
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Dec 23, 2003 |
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Those are the stories I like. Full of humilation, depersonalitzation and quite direct with room for reflection of feelings (8/10)
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kemosabe
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Dec 15, 2003 |
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A unique story that kept me hypnotized. The transformation of the woman is handled in an entertaining manner and I enjoyed every bit of it. (9/10)
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annasherwood
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Dec 9, 2003 |
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exceptionally well written, and a very hot story line---not usually a fetish i am interested in (lactation), but this was so well executed that it kept me interested (and turned on!) (9/10)
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mkemse
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Dec 9, 2003 |
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Can only get better, great everything (9/10)
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Moggy
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Dec 7, 2003 |
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I'll join Lex in commending this story. The writing is well proofed and consistent in style. I found it suitably hot in places, particularly the hotel 'breeding' scene. Maybe it was the content but my enjoyment tailed off in the latter part of the story. (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Dec 7, 2003 |
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This one is really off the wall, and done very well. I found myself almost horrified as the woman was changed into a slave cow, valued for her ability to be bred and provide milk; all in all a very depressing situation. What really impressed me was the author's development of this breeding subculture complete with its own supporting infrastructure. This is very well done in a most efficient manner. Although "heat" is usually the thing I value most highly in any story, this one is most worthy of being the exception to the rule. I am not sure that the story has ended. What is presented makes good sense and could be interpreted as a logical conclusion. On the other hand there is so much material worthy of further development that this could easily be expanded to epic proportions without losing its novelty or impact. My compliments to the author for a very entertaining and thought provoking effort. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Flost48
(Edit) (Dec 8, 2003)
- Thank you for your review.
This story was actually an exercise in development of a small idea. I have continued with the tale as you suspected but am not happy with it. It turned into what I consider base pornography. I am interested in character and story development as well as sexual escapades. I think having the reader involved with the character makes the story much more effective. I have another tale I am working on that is becoming an epic. Starts off slow but, then, doesn't everything?
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woolfighter
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Dec 6, 2003 |
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The story is good, just the beginning is a little bit unbelievable. Good work. (8/10)
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