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I'm the Mistress
Author: Tracer69
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(Added on Nov 24, 2003)
(This month 9798 readers) (Total 22284 readers) |
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I walked into the candle lit living room & stood still for a moment to adjust my vision. Just then she moved out of the shadows & quickly wrapped a blindfold around my head & eyes. She whispered to me as she bound the blindfold, "You are my prisoner now & you will follow my commands to the letter or else." |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Nov 26, 2003 |
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Competently written in terms of grammar and spelling. However this is less of a story than a semi-hallucinatory, stream-of-conciousness riff that attempts to be erotic. My review may be unjust simply because the story fails to turn me on whereas others may find it stimulatory. Let other readers voice their opinions before the author takes my opinion as anything more than a flaky comment. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
sm4hg
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Nov 25, 2003 |
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Just see my review on the other story (Novelty) by this author. (3/10)
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