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Torture Island
Author: Sir_Bor
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(Added on Nov 23, 2003)
(This month 112552 readers) (Total 191110 readers) |
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Torture Island is an island country founded by and for members of the BDSM community. The story describe island life for the slaves and masters. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slavecunt_lilith
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May 14, 2016 |
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Excellent story, wish there was more! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Jul 28, 2011 |
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I agree with the other reviewers - a promising story which would be improved with character development, more focus on individual suffering and better proofing/editing. The story sped along at breakneck speed and the only constant that jumped out was cruelty for cruelty's sake. I feel that cruelty should be contrasted with humanity, i.e. the slaves' perspectives. That then makes for a very powerful story. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
CruelOwner
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Jan 4, 2008 |
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Absolutely perfect, the line you fullfill with this series and The club Series are fantastic I hopw the author will keep going with more parts. (10/10)
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CarolinaSpkr
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Jan 19, 2004 |
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Sorry but I call this one a spade.
I had a terrible time following the story. It was if there were no real characters in the enema scenes, just pain sluts as you called them. they did not complain, they were not panked to a rosy red before the enemas and they had no reaction
to four enemas which increased in severity.also a 3 inch diameter butt plug how did it feel coming out? That would have had more realism. (2/10)
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jbowler65
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Dec 6, 2003 |
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This one was difficult to get into. It seemed to have some nice ideas that were just thrown together. no real character development and some proofing is needed. (4/10)
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bdsmbill
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Dec 1, 2003 |
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Nope, I didn't like this one too much. As another said, there is no empathy with the slaves, and no real character development with the tops. I don't feel like I got to know any of the characters. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Comatose
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Nov 27, 2003 |
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One of the better stories that I read. I personally can not wait for anymore parts to the story that you plan on writing. It has such potential as an entire series of stories. I especially liked the way the island has it's own type of economy. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 26, 2003 |
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Keep more chapters coming (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
GaryWilcox
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Nov 24, 2003 |
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I can agree with Lex Ludites points. Further, there is little empathy for the female/shemale characters in this story. The things they are forced to do her are vile, and it should effect them in every possible way. Since many people read this not just for the Top perspective but for bottom as well, it would serve the author well to take time to know Sarah (and Jennifer) before the cam to these dire straights, and to show their horror at being so far removed from their freedom. (5/10)
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lex ludite
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Nov 24, 2003 |
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On the good side, this one seems to have something for everyone. Some of the ideas put out by the author are fairly entertaining and show some thought. On the down side it seems to this reader that there is too much going on at too great a pace. The proofing is terrible! The first chapter was really atrocious, with its random capitalizations, misspellings, typos, incomplete sentences and the like. Things did appear to get better in the last three chapters, but still this reader suffered repeatedly from those nasty distractions that get in the way of reading. I presume that there will be more of this posted in the future. It would serve the author well to do a better job of proofing his work to avoid alienating his audience. (5/10)
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