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The Regime
Author: Pauly
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(Added on Nov 12, 2003)
(This month 13899 readers) (Total 29926 readers) |
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A story set in a future time when sexual activity is prohibited by the dictatorship. A young women is taken away and tortured for committing a sexual act. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Equalizer
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Nov 15, 2003 |
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Some interesting ideas, but too many of them were left undeveloped. Too many for a short story. The repeated mis-spelling of "vagina" was distracting. I was never sure whether it was deliberate. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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Nov 14, 2003 |
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I'm still trying to understand just what the punishment was. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lord Douche
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Nov 13, 2003 |
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So far so good :)
A few mistakes (It's spelt Vagina, witn an A, not an I) and you wrote he instead of she several times as well.
Apart from those, it's a good story and I'm waiting for more :) (8/10)
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