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The Family Vlad
Author: Lex Ludite
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(Added on Nov 8, 2003)
(This month 201784 readers) (Total 373648 readers) |
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Can Chief Vlad, a brutal, uncaring policeman handle the pressures caused by his nympho wife, Vicky, their sexually precocious children, and his arch rival, Candi Kurtz, a well connected police woman with obvious feelings for his wife and the potential to become Vlad's sex slave. Only time will tell as the story of the Vlad family slowly unfolds. This is not one for the squeamish or politically correct among us. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
(Edit) |
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Jul 2, 2007 |
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In between various acts of pleasant unpleasantness I managed to find a couple lapses in punctuation. Hmmm, you must be slipping, Lex. As usual, you manage to weave unpleasantries into a story like few others are capable. It's definately not my cup of tea - I will admit to grinning at the odd and dark humor you threw in. Tell me it was intentional - that you did throw in dark humor and that I am not a sick fuck.
Anyway, for brutal and heartless erotica, this is quite good. Almost a ten...a 9.7 because of the punctuation errors. Hell, I'll round up. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jul 3, 2007)
- Two reviews in three days after a period of two years of silence; what can I say, but thanks. Your review and overly generous rating are very much appreciated. As for the matter of punctuation, I stand corrected. I have already located a run-on sentence containing nearly forty words that lacks a verb! There are numerous places where commas seem to be outlawed. Indeed there are even areas that contain such gems as madame instead of madam, quite a difference in that one for sure.
As for my dark humor. Yes it is what it appears to be. A little humor can counter balance a lot of blood and guts, take my word for that one.
As for poor chief Vlad, he seems to be doomed to repeat his mistakes when it comes to dealing with the opposite sex which scare the hell out of him. However he will have to deal with Lt.Karlson, Tits Malone and Anita Watson before I put him out to pasture.
- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Jul 3, 2007)
- Okay, now I could have gone ahead and pointed out all the lapses but, for once, I was being nice. Go ahead, Lex. Show me up, ya bastich!
- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jul 4, 2007)
- No fair using Gaelic curse words.
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s1xer
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Jun 30, 2007 |
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Kept me enthralled to the end, now looking for more. Well done (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2007)
- Two years since the last review! Amazing how time does fly by when you're having fun. Your most generous rating and encouragement is greatly appreciated. Be advised that there is more to come, sooner rather than later.
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makito
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Jun 7, 2005 |
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Top notch continuation. Please keep writing the good stuff. Thanks! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jun 25, 2005)
- Thank you for the very encouraging words and a most generous review. Be advised that I've just developed a new plot line that will be posted very shortly. This should allow much more of the "good stuff" to be produced in subsequent chapters.
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| Reviewer:
Silenteyes
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Jun 3, 2005 |
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I have just begun to read this story and wow ... it is a gripper right from the begining and I really like that! I can't wait to read the rest. This story is to the extreme but mmmmmmm very enjoyable indeed! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jun 4, 2005)
- Your comments and generous rating are very much appreciated. It will remain extreme, but you'll also see the various sides of chief Vlad and the dynamics that develop between a variety of characters that are slowly introduced as the story goes along. I'm at a very important juncture in the plot and have not decided whether to extend or end this epic tale.
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naomi
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May 9, 2005 |
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against my will i have slowly been drawn deeper and deeper into kurtz' nightmare. i'm filled with a mixture of horror and extreme envy. more candi please! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (May 10, 2005)
- Thank you very much for your most generous review. Candi and Vlad are the odd couple in the BDSM world as far as I am concerned. I wish these two would make up their minds and either zap each other or live unhappily ever after. Sometimes I wonder who is really writing this story, me or them?
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Apr 17, 2005 |
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Great story, love to read them.
I would be happy if You write more chapters. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Apr 18, 2005)
- Considering your most generous rating and review how could I not comply with your request? Be advised that there are two more chapters that are being edited by yours truly in preparation for posting.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 17, 2003 |
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only question i have is, how can a story have snuff in it, and all the other goof aspects of a story but be consensual
could have been much better if it was all nc, make it more believeable (8/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Nov 19, 2003)
- You have a very good point there. I guess I spun out on that one. Thanks for the review, it is appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Nov 11, 2003 |
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It somehow lacks of intensity, of human emotions. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2003)
- You are correct. My protagonist is a brute who is being confronted with his hidden human emotions. This is what the story is all about.
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Nov 11, 2003 |
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This one got a 4 from me because the grammar, spelling and format was almost perfect. If it were not for that, I'd have gave it a 1. Perhaps it's personal taste getting in the way here of me giving this story a fair shake, because some of the descriptions were pretty steamy, however when I read about sex with 15 year olds, it's just not my bag. Still, if extreme violence with children is your thing, go ahead, it's well written, and absolutely unrealistic as well. Fantasies are fantasies I guess. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
abitbent
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2003)
- You're right Lex. I think personal preference biased my rating which was soley based on content type and not quality and presentation. Your writing skills are pretty amazing. I suppose it's like saying Wayne Gretzky isn't an athlete, just because I dislike hockey. *shugs*
- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Nov 12, 2003)
- As I've said before, if you can't stand the heat, stay out of my kitchen! You can't say you weren't warned. I do however appreciate your candor when it comes to your own personal hangups, but I resent being considered a punching bag rather than a writer.
- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Nov 12, 2003)
- Case closed on this matter as far as I am concerned. For the record my description of hockey is "goons on ice".
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| Reviewer:
luvmyhiney68
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Nov 11, 2003 |
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Great story! I look forward to more chapters. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2003)
- Thank you for taking the time to review my effort. I'm scrambling to do some serious reworking of the next few chapters, but expect to have something posted within the next week or two.By the way, love your handle.
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