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Behind Closed Doors
Author: Anne Gray
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(Added on Nov 2, 2003)
(This month 82727 readers) (Total 163265 readers) |
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Two friends help out the mother of an out of control teen! |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 3, 2012 |
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I gave this story an 8 because it is very well written. It would be much lower if I graded on whether or not I liked the story. It was nothing more than an exercise in how to dress someone radically in leather. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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I wonder what bug crept up Ludite's tight arse, as there's nothing wrong with this story. On the contrary, this "drivel" is far better than what Lex Ludite/Jethro Jodhpur could ever dream of coming up with...
JJ (9/10)
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azrlg17
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Jun 30, 2008 |
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Nice story, good sex, LOTS of bondage. The only thing I thing I didn't like was that Marsha didn't seem to miss her daughter at all. It seems kinda strange that she hasn't seen her for over a year and isn't distressed about that. But then it would complicate things for Jane and Karen if her friend was distressed. (8/10)
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sopor aeternus
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Dec 13, 2006 |
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sometimes i just feel owe Ms Gray an apology,I've been reading all her great stories but never took time to write one single review.so here I am.as I see it, this story is definitely brilliant, though not the best story from the auther.I kinda more into short powerful stories with an open ending,but still I was startled by the creativity from the stroy as well as the auther's command of the language itself.looking forward to read more from Anne.
ps:i am not a native speaker,so please excuse the grammatical problems in this review. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Anne Gray
(Edit) (Dec 13, 2006)
- Apology accepted:-))) If I could speak, or write, in another language as well as you do I would be very satisfied. Thank you. Anne
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La Toya
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Apr 19, 2005 |
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Very nice story (8/10)
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Backstabber
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Apr 19, 2005 |
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Anne,
I just wanted to say thank you for the update on this story because I have been waiting for it.
I say this because this type of fantasy is very erotic for me so keep up the good work.
I have read other people's comments on having them include Marsha. I think that is a good possibility but what about helping other parents in other neighborhoods. Whatever storyline you go with keep it up I really enjoy this story. I think you could create a much bigger story with this like I said before they could decide to move with their new pet to get a change of scenery or go with the Marsha storyline and then get a change of scenery. I think the real eroticism is secrecy in this story. You have done very well maintaining their secret in the story and that is why I really enjoy it. Thanks again for the great story and make sure those two keep America's youth in line.
Satisfied reader (9/10)
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Dododecapod
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Apr 19, 2005 |
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Sexy!I like the dominance aspect more than the long (very long!) descriptions of the bondage, but the "rape" scene more than made up for it!
The introduction seemed a little perfunctory; You could have shown us instead of telling us what a bitch Natasha was. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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This was realy hot for me, good job (8/10)
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emmacd
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Feb 5, 2005 |
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I have read almost all of your stories andfound them most interesting. I guess in not being a writer I am not critical but your bondages sound so similar. Such as ballet shoes, when high heeled pumps will turn ones head would be at least adiversion. Having been bound as a cd I know the levels of panic and yet the feel of the situation. You are good Try doing this to a cd. What a experience. Emmacd (8/10)
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bracemaiden
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May 7, 2004 |
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I quite enjoyed this story - it was interesting, creative, and written by someone who has a grasp of english. It was also long enough to have plenty of meat to get the senses going. Good one! (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Mar 20, 2004 |
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Normally I avoid this type of story like the plague, but curiosity got the better of me this time and here I am reviewing this one. This is a droll, or is it drool, effort with the standard cast of characters doing the kinds of things that they do to each other. The details pertaining to the stringent bondage that the teenager endures dominates. Whether most of it is believable is a moot point, but I am willing to suspend my belief for the sake of the story. I am sufficiently intrigued to admit that I am looking forward to the next installment. In passing I might add that the standard for this type of bondage story was established back in the 90s with the posting entitled "Judith's Wetpack" by Mr Spraycan. I recommend it highly to those fans of bondage stories.You will not be disappointed.I recently got around to catching up on the rest of the story and must admit that this is a superior effort that only gets better as the story progresses. My original observations do remain, but since this is a site devoted to fantasy I must in the interests of fairness raise my initial rating. My compliments to the author despite her occasional breaches of decorum. (8/10)
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arobert29
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Feb 2, 2004 |
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Outstanding, very enjoyable. (9/10)
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Taskmaster
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Nov 29, 2003 |
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Enjoyed how Karen and Jane decided to not only help their friend Marsha with her troublesome daughter Natasha but also obtain a trainable submissive slave for their sexual enjoyment. The start of Chapter 2 with mother and daughter within inches of each other was exciting but seemed to happen a little too quickly , hopefully in the future Jane and Karen may decide to add Marsha in a more active role perhaps abducting her to compare mother and daughter to each other. (9/10)
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XtremeInk
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Nov 27, 2003 |
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This story is *very* descriptive of the bondage activites that occure between the women. And that's pretty hot despite the fact that what happens to the teen is completely unrealistic. But it *seems* like it could happen which makes it a great fantasy read. I really liked the doorbell trick.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Anne Gray
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Nov 14, 2003 |
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Well lex your use of "I" six times in your review speaks volumns. Please don't do me any more "favours" and keep your sarcasm to yourself!
Anne (the rating was needed to post I used the average) (7/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jan 7, 2004)
- Please count again, I believe I used I seven times! I also reserve the right to use "sarcasm" as I see fit! I might also suggest that before you post drivel like this you at least proof read what you wrote. The fact that you didn't, speaks "volumes" in itself.
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jbowler65
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Nov 9, 2003 |
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A nice short story. I would have liked even more detail describing the daughter's training, but perhaps it will in future chapters. (7/10)
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