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Ansley in Prison
Author: Slut Jenni
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(Added on Nov 2, 2003)
(This month 98991 readers) (Total 158798 readers) |
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A young rich woman is arrested for prostitution and sentenced to 9 months in a speical Florida prison camp for beautiful young women. She has never been so humiliated before in her life. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
TipsyMcStagger
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Dec 22, 2010 |
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Great start, but slow down the story and expound on the details. That's where the devil is, after all. Clever plot elements so far! (8/10)
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sydneylover
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Mar 27, 2008 |
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have her do humiliating stuff (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ropetrick
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Oct 4, 2005 |
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Very nice actually, unfortunately a bit short. Might work as an inspiration for others as I do not expect the author will update it anymore. (7/10)
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Engineer
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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Worth while reading, although it remained fragmentary. (7/10)
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quixote327
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Feb 23, 2004 |
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Great kink, but short. Excellent start to a great story. (7/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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Nov 6, 2003 |
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Good story. Definitely worth the read. It has the feel of a story that might be personal to the author. Like, one of the author's sexual fantasies perhaps. (7/10)
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jbowler65
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Nov 5, 2003 |
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There's a promising idea within this story, but it does need some work. It's all in the details or in this case, the lack of. Pacing is way to fast. An edit with more detail will go a long way. (5/10)
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lex ludite
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Nov 5, 2003 |
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So far, so good, but hopefully this story has a long way to go. A bit too early to give a definitive rating, so this should only be considered as a bookmark. (6/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 3, 2003 |
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i hope it comes on the way it is (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mickydoughty1
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Nov 3, 2003 |
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Think you need to extend your description of humiliation, and slow the pace down. It seems as the author was eager to tell you the ending without developing the characters and plotline. If this is just the beginning then its acceptable for the reader, if thats the end, then it would be such a disappointment. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
SirSteven(D)
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Nov 3, 2003 |
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This author just has a great feel for describing humiliation. (8/10)
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