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My Training weekend
Author: rdragon
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(Added on Feb 14, 2001)
(This month 85412 readers) (Total 99813 readers) |
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She had a part time master, but her master thought a female assistant would help him control his slave while he was away. Story is written from the first person view of the young slave. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (4.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Switchhitter7
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Mar 22, 2009 |
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Look, we all make spelling mistakes, but this is unreadable. Simple words, Since you spell as sense, snapped, you spell as snaped,immediately, not imedately,spacific you spell pacific,planned is spell planed. You may have a good story here, bur I will never know because I cannot wade through the embarassing spelling. (3/10)
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