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Relentless 2
Author: Hawke
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(Added on Oct 21, 2003)
(This month 9632 readers) (Total 15543 readers) |
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The sequel to the relatively tame tickling story, the sequel portrays the same even through the eyes of the female. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 19, 2006 |
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barely 5 just nothing mch to ffer in this sorry (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 26, 2003 |
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Writing in the first person as a victim of the opposite sex is very difficult (I've tried it). This was probably a '6', but I bumped it to help counteract that idiot who reviewed it first. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Neopadinski
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Oct 23, 2003 |
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What the hell are you thinking? I agree with Hawke. If you had read the first Relentless, you would've known that the kidnapper is "you" (i.e., the reader) and the girl is the female of your choice. Essentially, you put the girl you want in. I thought it was pretty good, but like you said in the Author's Note, it wasn't quite as good as the first one. But the description of the girl's tickling is very good. And to people who have NOT read the first one yet: I would advise reading it to avoid sounding ignorant. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
tttttt
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Oct 23, 2003 |
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wanted more description of her body!what about nude photos of her by the rapist?
(1/10)
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- Replied by:
Hawke
(Edit) (Oct 23, 2003)
- Didn't you read the first one? The concept that the reader was SUPPOSED to grasp was that YOU decide who the female is. I can't describe a female in your mind, can I? As for nude photos: the same goes. Try reading stories in numerical order, because in the first one's description, I clearly pointed out that you determined who the female was. The "2" indicates that this story is the second one OF two.
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