|
|
|
|
|
Mistress of the Game
Author: Alex Bragi
|
| |
(Added on Oct 14, 2003)
(This month 97181 readers) (Total 151336 readers) |
| |
To others he may have been a very influential man to be shown respect at all times, but to her he was nothing more than a whimpering little whore she controlled - a toy for her pleasure and amusement. The story of Wendell, his sex life, and the women who control it. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 12 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
8% |
50% |
25% |
17% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
| Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (10/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (7/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
xman
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 28, 2007 |
| |
Very nice thank you for the wrighting and post. (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
pejanon
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 4, 2005 |
| |
Nothing like a good romantic story once in a while.
Actually on of the better Femdom stories I have read. (Ok, so it's a softie) I liked attention to details - without burying the overall scene. But what is best is what goes on between hot scenes - nothing! Neat trick; pack a series of mounting scenes, drop out those boring intermezzos that plague such stories - and still have a coherent narrative.
Very good read (hot too, of course.)
(8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
WildCat
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Apr 21, 2005 |
| |
I always LOVE tales of corporate men being dominated by aggresive women. (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
D. Atrocity
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 26, 2004 |
| |
This was the first story I ever read on this site. Its still as yummy as ever. Please keep the femdom flowing!
Speaking of flow, you have a very nice flow to your work and a clever sense of humor. (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Missy Moomoo
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Apr 27, 2004 |
| |
Sadistic with a touch humour. (10/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
lapog
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 27, 2004 |
| |
Very well written, as you said it is a pleasure being able to post it on my site and thank you for your premission. Keep up the good work. :) (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 18, 2004 |
| |
good start,even though the beginning is quite "standard" for this type of story, the lesbien twist makes it interesting. The continuations are OK overall. Personally I would have liked a bit more pain and suffering by Wendell. (8/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Oct 19, 2003)
- Thank you.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Wyn
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 11, 2004 |
| |
Interesting story. Very well written. (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
zanton
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Dec 13, 2003 |
| |
It flows very well and the tension is maintained.
(10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Dec 19, 2003)
- !
- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Dec 19, 2003)
- thank you!
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
jbowler65
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Nov 11, 2003 |
| |
Good story so far. I especially enjoyed how the secretary was involved. (8/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Nov 13, 2003)
- Thank you.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
slvWriting
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Oct 23, 2003 |
| |
The story is not bad... not bad at all in fact. It's great to see you've improved it!! :-) (8/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Oct 22, 2004)
- Thank you for taking time to read my story.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
abitbent
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Oct 15, 2003 |
| |
Well written, but the content is a little predictable. The story does contain a lot of the stereotypical scenarios that you'll find in most Mistress/slave stories. I managed to achieve a semi, but it could be because I've read too many stories... lol All in all, it's worth a read. (7/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Oct 22, 2004)
- Thank you, bearing in mind your feedback, I will try to work on something a little 'different' for future episodes.
|
|
|
About 