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Autumn Afternoon
Author: Dari
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(Added on Oct 14, 2003)
(This month 15514 readers) (Total 28947 readers) |
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A short recount about the first time I mixed some pain in my playing with myself. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kinkyballgag
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Mar 1, 2009 |
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I loved it. it was a good mixture of pleasure with some pain. and very good attention to detail.
all you need is some toys and it would be perfect lol.
and if the author reads this review. do you have a new e-mail i could reach you at? (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 30, 2006 |
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Simple but good story. Nice mixture of pleasure and pain. The story is written in 2003. Did you write more interesting things??? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Dari
(Edit) (Jan 30, 2006)
- uhm, well, if you look at my other stories, you might find some fictional stories there, maybe they are more to your linking?
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 24, 2004 |
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Intresting, it was a good story, but not my type of story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 18, 2003 |
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If this hadn't purported to be a true story, I would have given it a '7'. Nice. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Dari
(Edit) (Oct 30, 2003)
- thanks anyway, I know that it's not terribly inventive or something, but I thought if I ever write something real it should not be exaggerated
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