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Under My Thumb
Author: Fidelis Blue
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(Added on Oct 14, 2003)
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A headstrong woman needs to be mastered, but her lover is reluctant. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 28, 2005 |
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GREAT (10/10)
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jbowler65
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Jan 24, 2004 |
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Very well writen and erotic story. Very nice build up and character development. We loved how their relationship develops over time and look forward to seeing where it continues to go. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
anguisette
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Jan 5, 2004 |
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by far one of the best writers on this site. you seem to have 'mastered' (pun intended...:-D) the balance between a well-written story and eroticism. it makes for an excellent experience all-around. i'm heading off to read more of your stories as we speak! (10/10)
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bondage_bunny
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Dec 14, 2003 |
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This story was very well-written, with a good mastery not only of the English language, but of storytelling as well. The characters seemed like real people and I quickly was caught up in their developing relationship. I also found the story very erotic and fairly realistic. I hope there are more installments coming in the future. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Dec 14, 2003)
- Really glad you liked the latest chapter. We are working on the next one already.
Fidelis
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| Reviewer:
Keera
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Dec 8, 2003 |
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I like how this story is building. It is real, it is believeable. It is hmmmmmmmm I can see my self in the poor girls shoes... being teased, playing then etting caught. I like this! (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Dec 5, 2003 |
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Good but incomplete. I know the writing of this author and I hope that this is the first installment in a long, long series! If there is more of this delicious stuff I will upgrade my review but the author cannot, yea must not, leave us here! This could be the start of one of the best serials on this site.
The whipping in the stables was superb! This is not a seven, it is a nine! I loved the way that episode built, slowly, slowly toward its finale. This may be shaping up to be the best thing you have ever written. It reads like your research was productive. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Oct 15, 2003)
- I wanted to let you in on a little secret. There will be more installments. I am just about ready to start the next chapter. Needless to say Elizabeth tempted fate and Matt was only too willing to deliver a rather shocking response. I am currently testing some ideas out on my 'friend' Kitten and as soon as I can pull myself away from my research, look for more.
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| Reviewer:
Cleo671
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Dec 5, 2003 |
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This was the very first story I read on this site and I just loved it. The interplay between the two people is not just 'primal' it's intellectual, who can push the other person and to what limit. There were segments where I immediately I thought 'oh yeah he is planning to do this now and I can't wait to 'see' her reaction'.
It wasn't just a one way type of thing, it was an equilibrium between the man and woman.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Dec 5, 2003)
- Really glad you liked it. Chapter 6 will be posted soon. And we're working on Chapter 7.
Fidelis
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| Reviewer:
pooy
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Oct 17, 2003 |
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Best I've read on this site (10/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Oct 17, 2003)
- That's high praise. Thank you. We're already working on chapter three.
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