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Christopher's Predicament
Author: Tyjord
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(Added on Oct 7, 2003)
(This month 75544 readers) (Total 110120 readers) |
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Young man suffers as the subject of his sister's nursing school project. Not for the Squeamish! |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
dontmindme
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Aug 15, 2012 |
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Once I started, I just couldn't stop reading this. One of my most favorite stories on the site, every now and then I'll come back and read it again. (10/10)
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oldboy
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May 7, 2005 |
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I am new to this site, and this is my first review, but here goes. Enjoyed the story very much. It had all(many anyway)of the the elements I was looking for in such a story. I like the age of the boy, the fact that he had no choice in the consequences, did not like what was being done (who could!), and that it was his sister, doing these things to him. Couldn't believe the things that were done to him! I like the fact that they seemed "normal people", rather a dungeon role playing fantasy, type of setting. Also like the language used, rather than the vulgar. Again, being new to the site, not fully sure if I'm correct, but it appears that this is the only chapter of the tale, and that it was written awhile ago. Please add more, would like to see what happens next, maybe add some more specific CBT.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (May 12, 2005)
- Welcome to the site, and thanks for reviewing my story. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate all of your comments. Unfortunately, I have no plans at present to continue the story, but please check out my other stories for similar themes.
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| Reviewer:
gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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This is a prime example of what nuursing school can do to porn writers. It gives them sick fantasies...
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Aug 13, 2004)
- Heh, didn't need nursing school to come up with my sick fantasies. They come along just fine on their own. Thanks for the review.
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| Reviewer:
girininjo
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Nov 20, 2003 |
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Very good story, would like to see more like this one (8/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Aug 13, 2004)
- Thanks! I too wanted to see more stories like this. That's why I started writing. Thanks for the review.
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| Reviewer:
singslave
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Nov 2, 2003 |
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Excellent (10/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Nov 4, 2003)
- Many thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 9, 2003 |
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Intresting plot, I liked the story even though i am not into FemDom stories.
I did find it intresting that it was a brother/sister rather then trainers, like they say,let's keep in the family (9/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Nov 4, 2003)
- Nice to see that people not into FemDom are enjoying my stories. Thanks for taking the time to write a review.
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Oct 9, 2003 |
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A moving experience in every sense of the word, and done well I might add. It certainly appealed to that masochistic streak in me. Christopher was a bit too wimpy for my tastes and his ordeal stretched my credibilty even more than his intestines,but that's a minor ding. I certainly would read any subsequent chapters, and recommend that those dominant types among us give serious consideration to having their consciousness levels raised somewhat by reading this one, if they dare. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Oct 9, 2003 |
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quite intense. Would love to read a follow-up story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Oct 9, 2003)
- Thanks for the review! No current plans for a continuation, but you never know.
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| Reviewer:
woutvm
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Oct 8, 2003 |
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I especially like this story because of all the tools and the things which are being used and the complete submission in which the victim is forced. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Oct 9, 2003)
- Glad you liked the story.
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