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Making a Mark
Author: Fidelis Blue
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(Added on Oct 2, 2003)
(This month 9802 readers) (Total 14867 readers) |
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Having joined a secret BDSM society, Anna finds the marks of a beating threaten a new relationship. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
drayman
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Oct 26, 2003 |
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The anonymity of the group, the simple summoning of the subject, the execution of the ordeal and the talents of a writer with such a command of the written word, gave me great enjoyment. I have admired the writing style of Fidelis in the past, but this is the first time I have been moved to send a review. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Oct 26, 2003)
- Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope you like Under My Thumb, which I'm continuing to add to.
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Oct 25, 2003 |
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I read it. I enjoyed it. Now I'm reviewing it. This is cool, classy BDSM erotica in my view.
However I must agree with Lex on his point about the ending. It left me confused as to whether it is the end of a chapter or a short story, and hence detracted a little from my enjoyment :-( (8/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Oct 25, 2003)
- well, cool and classy is a real compliment. Sometimes I like to leave things open. Maybe it will continue, maybe they lived happily ever after...
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Moggy
(Edit) (Nov 8, 2003)
- Okay, I'm none the wiser.
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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Antoher great story, but then again all your stories are so nicely done. Can anyone say 'FIDELIS' **smile** (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Oct 6, 2003 |
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I liked Making A Mark. I liked the anonymity of the group. It made it more sensual and intense, at least to me. I look forward to reading some of your other works. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2003)
- Thanks for your kind words. Hope you like the other stories too.
Fidelis
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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This one seemed to fall apart at the end. The writing is still high quality but the subject matter is no longer fresh or innovative. (7/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Oct 2, 2003 |
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Another ten. Fidelis is developing into one of the top writers on this site. Congratulations again! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Oct 3, 2003)
- Your praise is generous, and much appreciated. Thank you.
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