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Nikki
Author: Nicole
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(Added on Oct 2, 2003)
(This month 68902 readers) (Total 158163 readers) |
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Nicole, a young college co ed who needs extra cash steals from the bookstore where she works and is caught. She has to do whatever her young teenage supervisor tells her to in order to keep herself out of jail and repay the debt, which gets larger as time goes on. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Oct 6, 2008 |
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It started nicely but if Stephanie is so attracted to Nikki then why the hell does she force her to have sex with so many men and never takes her herself? After the party Nikki thinks she had sex with Steph but it actually was never described.
Also as is sadly typical for a blackmail story the victim is too stupid to fight back in any way or negotiate some limits.
(6/10)
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grinner666
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Mar 7, 2008 |
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Very nice story of humiliation and abuse. Only two real criticisms: the drug state from the spiked drink resembles rohypnol or a GHB overdose more than ecstasy, and her begging to be fucked in that state (or even an X high) is just totally unrealistic. Kicked me right out of my suspension of belief and fucked up the rest of the story for me. (8/10)
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kamf1978
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Jul 19, 2007 |
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Fantistic humiliation tale. I love stories where somebody who looked down on people gets brought down and all the while they are fully aware of their degradation and helpless to stop it. (10/10)
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bigcat
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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That is one cool humiliation story. Very well done. Good portrayal of the comeuppance of an arrogant young thing. (10/10)
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jbowler65
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Dec 23, 2003 |
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Excellent introduction to the story. Keep up the good work. (9/10)
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frenchgus
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Oct 31, 2003 |
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I would like read more Nikki and others caracters (9/10)
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MrJerseyGuy
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Oct 30, 2003 |
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Love this one! I often lose interest early on in stories. With this one, I keep looking for the updates! (10/10)
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rcb
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Oct 27, 2003 |
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Very well written -- Keep going (9/10)
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ladybird
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Oct 27, 2003 |
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was certainly to my liking, i am a little biased that way however and totally love this type of theme, blackmail, loss of bet etc. I for one can't wait to see what happens next, certainly hope for more public exposure and humiliation, in short love it, keep going. (9/10)
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Curtis
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Oct 26, 2003 |
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Certainly a good story, and reasonably hot, but not quite up to the other reviewers' hype (unless I'm missing something...). A 'standard' story, though with some interesting twists. I also look forward to future installments and might be open to bumping my grade. (after part four) Much better! Rating revised. (8/10)
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mrbad187
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Oct 23, 2003 |
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Love the story,one of the best i've read. Keep up the good work. Peace P.S loved the barefoot thing. (10/10)
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djc_sd
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Oct 22, 2003 |
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Always enjoy the victim being pushed to a limit then over again and again. Enjoyed the start and hope it keeps rolling. (8/10)
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psychoDemon
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Oct 15, 2003 |
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This tale looks like it is going to be a scorchermay even rank alongside 'owned teacher'. Hope the future episodes come fast and furious (9/10)
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wabbit
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Oct 15, 2003 |
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Would agree with lex ludite...so far, so good, if not just a bit fast paced..looking forward to much more (8/10)
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lex ludite
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Oct 15, 2003 |
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So far so good, but I'll need more evidence that the author has written a classic.The proof of the pudding is in the eating and so far there hasn't been much food served at this reviewer's table.<br>Chapters 2 and 3 have convinced me that this story has very good potential, so I'm raising my rating accordingly. However it still has a very long way to go to match Terri Madison's "Second Place", Charles Frank's "Tracy in Trouble" or Parker's "Stacy's Senior Year", to name a few of the standards for this genre. (7/10)
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bikinkgirl
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Oct 15, 2003 |
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What a delicious story. Can't wait for the next part.
Bikinkgirl
xx (9/10)
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Emily
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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A most interesting effort. It contains some delightful humiliation and a most interesting contrast between the two characters. This is sort of like a beautiful Monet painting being slimed upon by a sudden invasive Picasso. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (Oct 16, 2003)
- "...slimed by a Picasso..." Priceless. That's just how I feel about Picasso.
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Master_c
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Oct 7, 2003 |
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Excellant beginning! Trapped by a junior female who seems to know a little about BDSM, and is wiling to take nikki to her limits. Must say that I enjoy true stories that keep a reader intersted in wanting to find out what happens next. Truly a 10! (10/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Oct 6, 2003 |
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Starting slow - but I love that. Character well sketched - I love that. But I agree with lexluddite (as I usually do) that we are going to need some novel plot development for this to rise to a ten. Fortunately, Nicole is a good writer and this should go somewhere. Me, I love my c.p., simple exhibition leaves me cold unless it sets the mood and the color of forboding that promises that things will get steadily worse for the heroine. (9/10)
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crickette
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Oct 6, 2003 |
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I thought your story was pretty good. It was a little choppy and it seemed to end abruptly. I did of course like the fact that Nikki got what was coming to her. (7/10)
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woolfighter
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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Wow. Great. I love it. Pleeease keep it up. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 3, 2003 |
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Great, WONDEFULL, the theme set ioutstanding, story is right to the point, i hope you continue to post many more chanpters real soon, i can't wait (10/10)
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ms_2b_used
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Oct 2, 2003 |
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Totally spellbinding! If only there could be hundreds of more stories like this! If given the opportunity to change anything, it would be to make Steffanie slim and attractive; a true vamp! How I have dreamed myself of becoming immersed in a similiar situation to a younger, and very attractive female! I can only hope that Steffanie will keep her in a constant state of sexual frustration; denying her any opportunity to reach orgasm but intentionally keeping her at the very epitome of excitation!
Can hardly wait for additonal chapters!
A new fan.
neenee (JaneenMarie O'Brien) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Master_c
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2003)
- Hello, I just happen to know that since this is a true story, Stephanie cannot be any slimmer than she is. I am pleased you enjoy nikki's story and there are more to come. And believe me, they do get better. And No, I am not nikki, just a person who has helped her get it in proper format and checked her spelling.
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