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The Pony Girl
Author: Alex Bragi
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(Added on Oct 2, 2003)
(This month 41158 readers) (Total 88808 readers) |
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The story of a young woman's journey to becoming a pony girl, and the man who tames and trains her. (not bestiality) |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
tessa
(Edit) |
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Apr 10, 2007 |
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To date, I have never understood the allure of the pony girl fantasy. Now, due to your wonderful tale, with a startling vividness, I do. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
RubbrSpatula
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Oct 30, 2003 |
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I do like this story, particularly the bar scene where Roy takes her...
The author could use an editor to proof his work for obvious mistakes that riddle chapter 1. And the klead character doesn't have aname, and she's awful quick to toss away her identity. I think that was too simple. Better to let us see a little conflict before she tosses herself to fate willy-nilly. Maybe not agonizing, but at least internal doubt or concern for her own wildness. And a girl as popular as she should already have a lover or a boyfriend... why doesn't she? Was a lack of interest in "pooky-love" boyfriends what drove her to play with fire by answering that ad? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Nov 27, 2003)
- Hi,
Thank you for your feedback. Yes, you're right now that I think about it, a little 'pulling and tugging' might have made a more interesting read, I agree. I deliberately didn't give the girl a name, but I guess that didn't work for you huh? Mistakes, consider them corrected.
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Oh and 'His work'? Just so you know, I'm female. :)
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| Reviewer:
kitten_2885
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Oct 18, 2003 |
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Thats a great pony girl story, will u be writing any more chapters? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Oct 19, 2003)
- Thanks kitten, and yes.
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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A nice tame story, well written too. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2003)
- Thank you Emily. Tame - that's a cute pun.
- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2003)
- Thank you Emily. Tame - that's a cute pun.
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| Reviewer:
masostud
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Oct 10, 2003 |
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This is what a ponygirl-story should be like: Hard training, endurance and full sexual use of her Body. Maybe I can propose for further continuaton to breed from the mare? (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2003)
- Thank you, I'm glad you aprove.
- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2003)
- Thank you, I'm glad you aprove.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 3, 2003 |
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GREAT Ponygirl story, this can only get better, hurry with more chapters (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Oct 3, 2003)
- Thank you, I really appreciate your encouraging comments and high rating.
Alex.
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