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Consequences
Author: NightmarePrincess
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(Added on Sep 13, 2003)
(This month 9320 readers) (Total 21583 readers) |
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Lindsey is the kind of girl who never understood that being a tease could lead to trouble. After leaving the bar and experience car trouble she soon learns that every action has consequences. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Sep 24, 2003 |
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It needs some work, although there were times when I could feel some heat. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Sep 14, 2003 |
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This one has its moments. The writing is acceptable, but the editing could be better.The changes of tense are a definite no-no. (6/10)
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