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Love in an Elevator
Author: Lofwyrkp
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(Added on Sep 10, 2003)
(This month 51198 readers) (Total 64095 readers) |
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A Christmas party shows a married woman what she'd been missing. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jul 25, 2005 |
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Another dynamite tale by this author. (10/10)
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Emily
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Sep 24, 2003 |
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A very nice, erotic read! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dee Driscoll
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Sep 19, 2003 |
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This is a nice little story. More in storyline than the actual storytelling though. I liked the plot and the resolution, however the main problem is this is more a synopsis for a story than a story itself. It's just a list of facts. It just states what happens. Only the last 5-6 paragraphs actually start telling the story rather than laying it flatly all out. Rewriting the whole story with more details, more insight in the main character's innermost thoughts, dillemas and dramas, and more juicy descriptions of her activities I guess, would greatly improve the whole thing. It would be worth the effort because the author has a solid, clean style and only needs to set his/ her goals a little bit higher. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
drayman
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Sep 17, 2003 |
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Well written, good tale and an enjoyable read. (9/10)
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Lord Douche
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Sep 13, 2003 |
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Short and sweet. Nice work. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Sep 11, 2003 |
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I think you are off to a good start. It was very intense. (7/10)
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