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The Park Lark
Author: David Shaw
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(Added on Aug 16, 2003)
(This month 9620 readers) (Total 18012 readers) |
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Two girls are lying in a park under some shady leaves and a bunch of young thugs come along and pin them down with a net. Worse yet, they have some other kinds of pins as well, long ones with very sharp points. After carefully explaining the situation Jodie leans back against the tree trunk and invites the girls to choose which sort of a prick they prefer. Both of them quickly gives his the nod. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
alsosprachzar
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Jun 10, 2012 |
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excellent, inventive story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Oct 22, 2005 |
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well, i dont know if it was true, who am i to say it is not? and it certainly sounds feasable. Jodi was certainly inventive. there is enough descriptive writing to give you a good 'feel' for the story, and i enjoyed it.
(7/10)
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