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The Visitor
Author: dav4jon
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(Added on Aug 9, 2003)
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His visits are a ray of light. He enriches my life. He's my 'Dad'... |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Stefanie1391
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Sep 30, 2006 |
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I was entertained and would have loved for it to continue. Definitely above average writing. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Itinerant_Dad
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Aug 14, 2003 |
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This is a brief and simple slice-of-life story where the character of the "son" is sketched with some care; the author does not let the words get in the way.... with some editing and polishing, this could be the opening chapter in a very interesting series. (7/10)
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