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The Hands
Author: Sir_Nathan
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(Added on Jul 24, 2003)
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A kidnapped female finds herself at the mercy of some heartless males. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 24, 2004 |
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very well done (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Jul 27, 2003 |
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Just OK, I thought. The writing was 'correct' for the most part, but there was little attempt made at characterization, or motivation, or description of anything but the torture itself. More like a dream sequence than a story. Too bare-bones for me. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir_Nathan
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2003)
- Thankyou for your review.
Quite rightly you described the story as a dream sequence. A friend told Me of her dream and begged Me to write a story about it. I thought that made your review interesting.
Again thankyou. Very insightful.
In the future I may add more of My stories, "The Hands" was submitted here to "test the waters".
Nathan
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 24, 2003 |
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I agree, oh my, all those hands. It was nice and descriptive too! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
thunderball
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Jul 24, 2003 |
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Loved the build up and mystery of the disembodied hands (9/10)
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