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Becoming Her Maid
Author: Jackpot
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(Added on Jul 20, 2003)
(This month 32855 readers) (Total 78431 readers) |
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Emily hires a maid but the roles soon become reversed. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 26, 2010 |
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i think the transformation occurs over to short a timescale, which spoils the story for me. Of course this could be someones dream, then it would be more believeable. (8/10)
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Juventino
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Jun 4, 2010 |
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very good i enjoy these stories where the maid gradually takes over, well written and entertaining. good job (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 21, 2009 |
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Excellent little tale, even when there's little sex, it still is highly erotic.
JJ (9/10)
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Kev
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Dec 13, 2005 |
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I just love this story. In fact it was this piece that made me start dreaming about autoring my own story.
I loved the transformation and the humiliating parts. The part where she is turned on as she is being undressed and then the vaaccum part. Would have loved a few more lesbian encounters before the ending thou.
Loved it Mate Keep it up (9/10)
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woolfighter
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Jul 22, 2003 |
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I didn't quote a ten cause it's unfinished. But it is one of the most lovely story I read then and I've read again now. Bravo. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Jpot
(Edit) (Jul 24, 2003)
- Thank you for the pleasant review it is most appreciated! Yes, this was an earlier work that I decided to revamp. I am glad you liked the rewrite!
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 21, 2003 |
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A rather tame story, but the transformation is pretty cool. This author's stories seem very twilightzone-ish, perhaps that is why I like them so much! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Jpot
(Edit) (Jul 24, 2003)
- You know I never thought about it that way before.
Emily I noticed you have been writing reviews on a bunch of my stories, it is nice to have a fan. Thank you for the kind reviews!
Jackpot
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