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    | Weighed
      Average (?):  (5.5/10) |   
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jun 18, 2004 |   
    |  | ok, but nothing spectacular (5/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    boccaccio2000g
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Aug 16, 2003 |   
    |  | Not badly written.  The story has nice intensity, but ends (if it has ended) much too abruptly.  The errors, such as they were, didn't jump out at me quite as much as they did to Moggy, whose reviews I usually find right on the money.  (Or maybe it's because I just finished reading a story that was really bad!) Or maybe I was making subconscious allowances for the possibility that the author might be writing in English as a second language. In any event, it was a fairly good effort, I thought. (5/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Moggy
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jul 23, 2003 |   
    |  | Competent, although still with many grammatical errors. Clearly makes a good attempt to push the right erotic buttons, but generally a crude work. (3/10) 
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    Emily
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jul 21, 2003 |   
    |  | Very descriptive.  Took me into the story.  Most enjoyable! (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Miss Suki
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jul 20, 2003 |   
    |  | The dirty talk definitely got me off, and i love these kinds of stories.  However, I found that the story ended a bit abruptly. (6/10) 
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