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Jane's Willing Sex Toy
Author: Brenda
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(Added on Jul 17, 2003)
(This month 54531 readers) (Total 70615 readers) |
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Watching each other masturbate leads to hot lesbian sex for two Air Force roommates. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 13, 2009 |
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As with most of Brenda's stories, this is another highly erotic tale. And another smelly one, too.
JJ (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 19, 2008 |
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good story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jul 22, 2003 |
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This is a good story for what it is meant to be. However, a story is not the place for the author to dig for sympathy because of his/her health problems. Forums exist for that. In any case, I didn't find the story to be incredibly captivating, and I found myself unconciously skipping over parts. Make it longer, and a bit more intersting, and it will be good. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Feb 13, 2009)
- I feel that when an author wishes to leave an addendum at the end of his/her submission, which informs the reader about the ungoing state of the author's health, that author can do so.
Also, the addition of the words "dig for sympathy" are uncalled for, prejudiced and lacking any form of tact towards the author.
Should our 'explosive chickenthief' have any quarrels with the added content, he should take up the issue through means of Personal Messaging, also to be found on the forum.
Not going to comment on your 'review', as such is not my place. But the addittion of yer little rant still makes me feel you would have given a higher rating without Brenda's health info.
On the other hand, probably not. You seem to be rather cheap, when it comes to giving a score.
JJ
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| Reviewer:
ms_2b_used
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Jul 19, 2003 |
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GAWD! I totally adored your story "Sextoy"! I became SO terribly involved with the story that I actually came to envy enormously, the submissive one!
I am immensely sorry to here about your health difficulties and pray that you will do nothing but continually become entirely well once more!
From the scenario of your story, I also now envy this Helen and Angie you mentioned in your postscript! Though I was a total submissive to a woman 9 years my senior for a blissful period of 7 1/2 years, I now have my home in a small, somewhat snobbish village 46 miles North of Chicago so have little chance of again meeting a Mistress/Domme!
The very best in all things!
neenee (JaneenMarie O'Brien)
ms_2b_used@excite.com (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 18, 2003 |
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A nice story I like the fluidity of this one! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
BruceBoxer
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Jul 17, 2003 |
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Love woman on Woman Brenda! Welcome back and while not cured yet, sounds like things are looking up. Would enjoy being at your tryst this summer--sounds like it'll be a blast (think I know the girls from my USAF days).
Cheers,
Boxer (7/10)
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