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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 14, 2011 |
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First of the Cumbag series I ever read and I don't see anything wrong with it, except maybe some exaggerations in a cartoonesque way -but nothing that hampers my reading.
I've never been a boy scout so my fragile mind couldn't care less what the author makes 'em do.
A fun -and exciting- read with an over-the-top but oh-so-delicious main character.
great!
Would have gone for an eight score, but adding two points to even-out the -in my opinion- undeserved low ratings...
Will have a go at more Cumbags later. *grin*
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 21, 2005 |
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good story but not realistix and especialy with the boys, boy scouts even in fiction with their views make this unrealistic, plus you may be running out of ideas for poor cumbag without duplicating what you have done already, how many dfferent situations can she be put into, thisi s bnot meant as a complaint, rather a question (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
malelesbian
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Oct 27, 2004 |
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I don't think I will be reading any more of the Cumbag series after this. I have fond memories of the Boy Scouts, and this story was so diametrically opposite anything I believed the boy scouts to be that it was entirely unbelievable. The only character in this series that seems to have any development at all is Cumbag herself, and that is minimal at best. Come on, Steve! It's obvious that you have an imagination and that you are adept at making Cumbag talk and act like the ultimate slut she is. You don't have to sink to this level. You could have come up with a better story. I will give it a 4 based on the character of Cumbag and the dialogue. (I would LOVE to hear a beautiful woman talk and beg that way... LOL) But otherwise, this story is worthless. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
fasloth
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Oct 17, 2003 |
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Great job, Steve. Absolutely loved cumbag. The only aside I have is that I could have done with these being frat boys or a even little older - but then that's a personal preference. I will look for more of your work. Pay no attention to the 'highbrows', most people read this stuff because it's a fuck story - not because it's Melville. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jul 11, 2003 |
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What's not to get? This is the ultimate walk on the wild side, or should I say the dark side. This is one of those secret pleasures that no one likes to admit they have. We all have these uncontrollable, insane fantasies racing around in our subconscious or perhaps at a higher level. The author has the knack to articulate his rather well. He uses the english language properly, communicates his fetches extremely well and makes no excuse for what it is. This is the ultimate double cheeseburger, fries and a milkshake, politically unacceptable in the extreme but quite enjoyable. Let's stop all the bs and hypocrisy,this is our world and let's stop covering it up with learned discussions about how many adjectives can dance on the head of a pin, or what generally passes for criticism at this site. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Jul 10, 2003 |
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I agree with Nitrofox and Moggy. I guess I just don't get it. This doesn't work for me even as a stroke story. The dialog is so stilted, so awful, that it's the barf bag, not the tissues I need to keep handy. Does anyone really talk like that? Would you want to be around them if they did?
On the plus side, spelling and grammar are mostly okay. On the otherhand, all of the characters seem to be on the same page. Cumbag wants to be abused and everyone wants to abuse her. Where's the tension, the conflict? Where's the story?
Another problem is that the author seems to keep writing the same story. Cumbag wants to be abused and everyone wants to abuse her. You can plug in a different set of abusers and change the backdrop, but it's still the same story. The story is both internally and externally repetitive. It doesn't grow in the retelling (and retelling and retelling).
I think the author has promise, but I wish he would expand his horizons beyond stroke stories. I think he, and the reader, would find it rewarding. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jul 11, 2003)
- It is often noted that all authors write the same story over and over. The great ones just disguise it much better. This is not to say that the author is either a great one or a total hack.
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dragonheart
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Jul 10, 2003 |
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I idon't know why, but I like these stories. I hope Steve writes lots more of them. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Jul 9, 2003 |
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Crude and repetitive. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Amber
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Jul 9, 2003 |
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I just love "Cumbag" ! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jul 9, 2003 |
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This isn't the "ultimate cumslut", this the ultimate "idiot". 1. The language is ridiculous. I can't imagine why anyone would get turned on by such blatant overuse of silly words. 2. The adult male, who got "cumslut" from the other guy is totally stupid. He starts complaining when she wants to suck his cock. What's more stupid than that?
This story is just plain silly. It's not worth reading at all. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
stevedema
(Edit) (Jul 10, 2003)
- Thank you!
The email I receive indicates that many people disagree with you. The intelligent people that visit here realize that my stories serve one purpose…stroking and diddling.
Why don’t you contribute to the site?
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