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La Fabrica
Author: Mr JOPI
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(Added on Jul 6, 2003)
(This month 48141 readers) (Total 53791 readers) |
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Un empleado de una fabrica aprovecha el lugar de trabajo para atacar a su jefa. (IN SPANISH) (EN ESPANOL) |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (4.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Jul 8, 2003 |
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Coincido con esclavadana que es sólo un violación, pero tiene un final aceptable y es creible.
I agree with esclavadana that's only a rape story, but it's got an acceptable end and it is believable. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
esclavadana
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Jul 6, 2003 |
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Francamente no me ha gustado. En primer lugar la historia no es bdsm sino, pura y simplemente, una violación. La narración no tiene intriga, emoción ni humor. En cuanto a la forma (vocabulario y gramática) es bastante primaria.
Really I haven't enjoyed this. First, the story is not bdsm but merely rape. It lacks suspense, emotion or humor. Its vocabulary and grammar are poor. (2/10)
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