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Social Security Slut
Author: Jackpot
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(Added on Jul 4, 2003)
(This month 17095 readers) (Total 41541 readers) |
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Turning down a customer can be very degrading and painful as Stacie is about to find out. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
alsub
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Dec 13, 2008 |
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NOT on of your best (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 9, 2004 |
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just doesn't cut it, sorry (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 7, 2003 |
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This story was a real disappointment to me. I expected more from reading a previous work by this author. Still, there were moments of turn on for me. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mistresscandy
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Jul 5, 2003 |
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very unbelievable! poorly written, had a very hard time reading due to da's de's etc... the = the, not da. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Jpot
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2003)
- Obviously this is not one of my better stories. First of all, it was written two years ago before my most recent ones. I guess I should not have posted it but I took a chance. I do know 'the' as opposed to 'da'. I was trying different things with dialect that obviously did not work. Oh well back to the drawing board. If you want to read a better story from me try Bred by My Secretary. Thanks for the review.
Jack
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| Reviewer:
don11
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Jul 4, 2003 |
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I like the change of perspective but the credibility sucks!
Pity - there is some talent ... underneath. (6/10)
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lex ludite
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Jul 4, 2003 |
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I know you're writing fiction, but this one just isn't credible. The dialect didn't help matters either. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jul 4, 2003 |
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Not too good. Not believable at all. (3/10)
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