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New Life
Author: Lord Douche
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(Added on Jul 2, 2003)
(This month 46104 readers) (Total 100609 readers) |
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Jenny gets a strange package for her birthday and feels compelled to wear what is inside, bringing her best friend along for the adventure. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Koli22
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May 29, 2008 |
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like it (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 12, 2005 |
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I really enojyed the story,the concept and everytihng asbvout it, i find very few stories "perfect" hope you do more like this in time (9/10)
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quixote327
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Mar 29, 2004 |
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Good basis for a story, but I had trouble following the characters. It seemed to jump around quite a bit. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Mar 30, 2004)
- It was my first attempt at a story. Notice the lack of updates? :)
I didn't think people were still reading it!
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| Reviewer:
catgurl_ashley
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Jul 17, 2003 |
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Wow I enjoyed this story so much!
This is just my type of kinky story. I adored the latex bodysuit so much.
WANTS TO SEE MORE MORE MORE AND MORE!!! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 17, 2003)
- Thankyou for your vote, but I'm not sure if I'll be continuing this story. If anyone feels that I should, feel free to e-mail me. If I get enough, perhaps I shall :)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 11, 2003 |
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An odd story. I wasn't going to review it, but the large number of high ratings seduced me. There's one big mechanical problem -- you keep putting the quotes in the same line with action by other characters, so half the time I can't tell who's speaking. Aside from that, there's the 'magic' aspect. A new suit for Emmy magically appears when she mentions that she'd like to try one on. The pictures on the collar magically change. The suit magically is an exact replica of Jenny's face and body. The suit magically splits open when Jenny's bra hits the bed. I could go on, but what's the point? The author has some real talent, but wastes it on this tale. I LOVED the suit, though. Wish the emphasis had been more on that. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 13, 2003)
- I must admit myself that I think this story isn't going far. It was good at the start, and possibly that was where I should have left it, despite the calls for more.
About the magic aspect though; I had thought about that and was going to explain it further along in the story, keeping the "element of mystery" in there for a while (I try not to throw crucial things in that won't be explained at some point), but I'm not sure now. This was kind of my first attempt at this, I was suprised how popular it was.
As for my mechanical problem... I have a slight adversion to putting in lots of paragraphs :) I'll keep it in mind.
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Firepager
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Jul 7, 2003 |
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I hope this is the beginning. If not, the rating would be a 1 (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 8, 2003)
- Yes, it is the beginning. I'm not too happy with Chapter 2, and I may rewrite it. If you give a review, at least give some constructive criticism, instead of saying it deserves a rating of 1
Edit: After reading some of your other reviews, and everyone elses opinions of the same stories, I have come to the conclusion that you are not worth listening to. Goodbye, and thankyou for your vote.
PS: If All or Nothing is sleeping pills, then I must have insomnia.
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Diamond_A
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Jul 6, 2003 |
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Chapter 1 of this story is hot: well written and filled with suspense. The action moves forward paragraph by paragraph. But the devices seem exaggerated and sadly, the emotional rollercoaster ride, the fears and thrills experienced by Jenny and Emmy, are left unrevealed. (8/10)
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peter1960
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Jul 3, 2003 |
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Can't wait till it goes on with this story (9/10)
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GrottrolletNaug
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Jul 3, 2003 |
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Entirely my kind of kink. Rubbersuits, insertions and mystery =)
Although, i would agree that some slowdowns and more details would be interesting at some points in the story. I really look forward to an continuation. (9/10)
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Hornyreddevil
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Jul 3, 2003 |
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i agree. the story is very promising but could slow down just a hair and use a little more detail. other then that its a great story. but im never happy. i can find something wrong with every story i ever read (8/10)
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crepax
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Jul 2, 2003 |
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I agree with torny, but apparently saw a lot more promise with the story. I too am looking forward to the next installment. (9/10)
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redEva
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Jul 2, 2003 |
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Delightful, given that rubber is not my fetish – this piece of writing made me unexpectedly aroused! Can not wait to see what awaits little horny sluts! Thumbs up to writer – please do not keep us waiting to long! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 3, 2003)
- Thanks for the support. I've been a bit busy lately so it may be a day or two more before the next part.
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torny
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Jul 2, 2003 |
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A bit simplistic but has potential. I look forward to the next installment. (5/10)
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