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If It Hurts, Cry Uncle
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Jun 16, 2003)
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Just when you think you got away with murder an innocent remark can make family life difficult. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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not bad, not as good as some of your other's, grammer and spell take time for those who do nor speak english well (6/10)
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kayce
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Jul 1, 2003 |
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Please don't knock spelling when you spell though as tho, come on you must understand it's English.
Thank you for your interest, try the next one.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
annasherwood
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Jun 24, 2003 |
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an incredibly hot subject and plot (tho a tad unbelievable), and some very good scenes...overall, however, it didn't flow well, had distracting grammar and spelling mistakes, and needs work to make it true quality... (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
ltlmisst
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Jun 20, 2003 |
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Whilst the spelling and grammar could definitely be improved, and the plot is a little unbelievable, the underlying concepts in this story are definitely hot and the sex scenes are cum-worthy. The beginning is very difficult to understand but it is worth persisting with if you can put up with the spelling. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jun 18, 2003 |
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This story is terrible. You can't even comprehend what the author is writing about in the first couple paragraphs of the story. The grammar is noexistent, punctuation is sporadic at best, and the "story", if that is what it can be called, is oncomprehensible to even the most simple of laypeople. Please improve this. This is an insult to the community. We're here to read stories, not words shuffled together. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jun 18, 2003)
- I fear your brief exposure to the whimsical writing style of Pagan has infected you and your spell checker; noexistent, oncomprehensible? I think you've got it, in more ways than one.
By the way, try reading Paladin's latest; now that's true pain and suffering.
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