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Spring Break Cruse
Author: Paladin
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(Added on Jun 16, 2003)
(This month 23165 readers) (Total 53537 readers) |
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College coed goes on a spring break cruse. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 17, 2003 |
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wish i could go back to spring break, how things have changed (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Deemaster
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Sep 17, 2003 |
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I suppose the incorrect spelling in the title should have given a warning. The writer needs to proof read his contribution and make use of a Spell Check application. The story is not that well constructed and I regret that I found it boring. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Eldivino
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Jun 21, 2003 |
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The story? is not bad at all. You have to work on the spelling, and, if I may suggest, add a more powerful ending to it. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 18, 2003 |
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I have been warned? I should have been warned about the truly appalling number of mis-spelled words, some of which even a spell-check program would have caught, though most are of the 'wrong word' variety. Only got halfway through before it became too much for me. (3/10)
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