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Fore!Play
Author: Fox
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(Added on Jun 13, 2003)
(This month 108204 readers) (Total 140461 readers) |
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Mistress Alison thought it would be fun when she and her pet accepted Lady Meranda's invitation. This story was published previously by the author on www.guest.bound.to/FoxTales and www.bdsmbooks.com It has been revised prior to uploading here. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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mkemse
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Apr 8, 2006 |
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One of the best i have read in a long tim,e loved the length , details not a weak link in the story (10/10)
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Dürrer
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Jan 5, 2005 |
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(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Shellyfemme
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Nov 26, 2003 |
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i enjoyed your story and wouLd recomend it to my friends. I Loved the part where you had the sLave shave her mistress, and the ending with her fucking her with the diLdo gag.
(8/10)
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julise
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Nov 15, 2003 |
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Incredible story. Very well written and wonderful detail. (9/10)
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Grey Slayer
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Oct 8, 2003 |
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I enjoyed it greatly. I found this story years ago on another website, and I just re-read it after finding it here. Highly enjoyable. I like the imaginative bondage, the focus on rubber clothing and helmets (yum!), the punishments, and I especially like the ending. A haughty mistress reudced to slave status against her will really stokes my fires. Thank you. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (Oct 8, 2003)
- Thank you Grey Slayer. The story was originally published by me in the last century (I love saying that) on my late personal website "FoxTales". It has been updated and improved since then. I'm glad you enjoy it.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 23, 2003 |
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This excerpting from a larger work isn't working for me (the second time the author has done it on this site). It cheats the reader of the exposition of the main character, not to mention how she found herself in her present predicament. Pretty good writing, though, and mildly hot. I haven't figured out how to differentiate the edited portions of reviews. Anyway, this is after the posting of the whole story: Upgraded from a '7' to an '8', for reasons Fox knows well. (I must be having a good night!) (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (Jun 18, 2003)
- Thank you Curtis for your input. I have taken your comments about the story into consideration; they will be reflected in the entire story when it is posted.
As to excerpting./cheating ... think of it as a 'trailer', or as a morcel to entice ...
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| Reviewer:
kittenfemme
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Jun 21, 2003 |
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You've managed fabulous character development and a near realism that makes me swoon! I wanted to take Julia home for myself by the time I was halfway through. Chapter nine is SO hot! *purr* Thank you for posting the whole thing Fox. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
DSMaster62
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Jun 14, 2003 |
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An excellent excerpt from the larger story. I hope the author will post the remaining chapters. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (Jun 18, 2003)
- Thank you for the vote of confidence. The entire story will be uploaded soon, once I finish some well advised revisions.
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kittenfemme
(Edit) (Jun 20, 2003)
- The whole story? *purrr* And just in time too. I finished the last novel I picked up and was looking for something to read.
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don11
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Jun 14, 2003 |
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Needs a context and a setting.
(6/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (Jun 18, 2003)
- As mentioned, this is an excerpt. I will be interested to read what you have to say about the entire story.
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Jun 14, 2003 |
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As Curtis, I hate uncompleted postings, too. The excerpt was so promising and worth while reading, so the whole story deserves becoming posted. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (Jun 18, 2003)
- Thank you for the vote of confidence. The entire work is coming soon to a computer near you.
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