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Jehovah Witness Assault
Author: Mark
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(Added on Jun 6, 2003)
(This month 53120 readers) (Total 80030 readers) |
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A mother and teenage daughter, who are members of the Jehova Witness', face an all night of terror when a neighbor finds out that womem of the cult do not report the shame of rape. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 8, 2004 |
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will there be more?? (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Magilla
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Jun 9, 2003 |
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Story line lacks intensity. Story is told too dispationatly. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
drake7
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Jun 8, 2003 |
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The content has some redeeming qualities, but it has many flaws. The wording in the story is awkward and strange, as well as having many mispellings. My advice is to think the story out better; perhaps ask someone to read it before you post it, and as everyone should do before posting- use a SPELL CHECKER. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 7, 2003 |
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Bad grammar, bad spelling, bad writing. He's been planning this for months and suddenly in the middle of it, he thinks of this miracle drug. I thought the point of the story was that Witnesses won't report a rape, so why does he need the drug at all? Senseless. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jun 6, 2003 |
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This was an interesting and erotic story. The premise was believable, and the execution of the plan was well thought-out. Unfortunately, the story was peppered with grammatical errors that detracted from my enjoyment of the tale. The occasional spelling eroor didn't help. I won't say that the drug that was used doesn't exist, for I have no knowledge of such things, but I do somewhat doubt it. Overall, an erotic story. I would like to see a continuation, as well as some proof reading.
Nitrofox (7/10)
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- Replied by:
anguisette
(Edit) (Jun 7, 2003)
- i find it quite ironic that you misspelled "error" in context of complaining about spelling problems....
- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (Jun 7, 2003)
- I assumed the mis-spelling was intentional.
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